避寒避暑的好地方雲南羅平。大家順便評價一下我寫的詩歌咋樣

Homesickness

When i was young.

Homesickness was the hard-working firgure of my mother under the light

I was at school

She was at home

After growing up

Homesickness was a train ticket

She was at south

I was at north

Later

homesickness was a phone call

She was there

I was here

Now

Homesickness is Some fragments

Only in my dreams

鄉愁

小時候

鄉愁是燈光下母親操勞的身影

我在學校

她在家

長大後

鄉愁是一張火車票

她在南方

我在北方

後來

鄉愁是一個電話

她在那頭

我在這頭

現在

鄉愁是我夢裡的一些片斷

圖片裡的景色就是我的家鄉雲南羅平縣，那裡一年四季如春，景色優美。當北方白雪飄零的時候，我的家鄉已經春暖花開。鳥語花香。那是真是避暑避寒的好地方。瀑布是長底彝族區的九龍瀑布，春天瀑布大，二月份去更熱鬧。第二和第四張照片是金雞峰叢。一目十峰。並且每年二月份左右有個盛大節日，油菜花節。還能見到你想見到的明星。