如何讀懂(半)開放作文的提示,抓住關鍵詞句,寫出好的作文


如何讀懂(半)開放作文的提示,抓住關鍵詞句,寫出好的作文

解題指導

寫(半)開放性作文,考生首先要讀懂所給的提示,弄清情況和要求,然後抓住關鍵詞句,進行記敘、解釋、說明、議論,再根據要求加以合理想象,並用通順的語言表達出來。要具體做到:

1.認真審題,把握要求,找準關鍵句,提煉主題。

2.依據主線,草擬提綱,梳理文章脈絡。

3.定位人稱,確立時態,遣詞造句組篇章。(半)開放作文人稱的使用較為靈活,考生應根據文章提示準確定位人稱,然後將重點放在文章的遣詞造句上,儘可能運用自己熟悉的表達形式來靈活表達。

實戰演練

(2017·甘肅天水甘谷二中模擬)

假設你的筆友Tom因上次高三期末數學考試未及格而備受打擊,情緒低落。請你(王華)給他寫一封信,鼓勵他重拾自信,實現夢想。

注意:

1.詞數100左右;

2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

構思要點 請寫出要點提綱


範文賞析 欣賞並背誦滿分作文

Dear Tom,

I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam,but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.

As Senior Three students,we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success.There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure,which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes.Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study.As for your anxiety,I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that you can go on with your study energetically and efficiently.

I hope all above can help you a lot.Let's work hard together and turn our dreams into reality.

Yours,

Wang Hua

作文升級 依據括號內提示改寫滿分作文

Dear Tom,

I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam,but ①it worries me most that you are in low spirits when facing failure(當你面臨失敗時的低落情緒是最讓我擔心的;it作形式主語).

As Senior Three students,we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success.There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.②In order to escape repeating the similar mistakes,we should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure (為了避免犯同樣的錯誤,我們應該不遺餘力地分析失敗的原因).③Finding out the cause of our failure,we can make progress in our study (找到了失敗的原因,我們就能在學習中取得進步).As for your anxiety,I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that you can go on with your study energetically and efficiently.

I hope all above can help you a lot.Let's work hard together and turn our dreams into reality.

Yours,

Wang Hua

對點訓練

(一)

(2017·河北石家莊二模)

假如你是高三學生李華。你從新華網上得知21st Century就"我們如何支配壓歲錢"這一主題向大家徵稿。請用英文向報社投稿,介紹你的預算。

注意:

1.詞數100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;

3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I've learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.


Yours sincerely,

Li Hua


參考範文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I've learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.

In China,it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Festival.So it is important for us to put the money to good use.How I budget my gift money is as follows.

First of all,I want to buy some books to enrich myself.In addition,I will join in a summer camp,which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork.Besides,I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help.

Anyway,we should spend our gift money doing something useful and meaningful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

(二)

(2017·河北石家莊二模)

假定你是李華。你的美國朋友Gary Lee即將來華。他想有一箇中文名字,向你求助。請回復郵件,介紹中文姓名的特點,幫他取一箇中文名字,並簡要說明理由。

注意:

1.詞數100左右;

2.名字可用中文表示;

3.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

Dear Gary,


Yours,

Li Hua

參考範文

Dear Gary,

I'm very glad to know that you are coming to China.Of course,a Chinese name will help you fit in with the new culture better.

The biggest difference between Chinese names and English names is that we put the family name first.A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters,which often carry some special significance or expectations.As you are an energetic and warm-hearted boy,I recommend you the name 李陽,Li Yang.The family name,which is shared by billions of Chinese,has the same pronunciation as yours.The given name means the sun in Chinese.

I hope you like your new name and have a really good time in China.

Yours,

Li Hu a


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