老师有话说：
中考英语作文是一个具有明显得分套路的项目，最流行的结构就是三段式，“观点——要点——总结”，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！做到这十个字，你就能拿一等作文。
英语高分作文杀手锏—三段四步法
中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：
1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。
三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏
知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。
“三段”（三个段落）——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。
中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，（SAT是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考）。
我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing(汉堡写作)
“四步”
有了框架就相当于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四个步骤来实现。
步骤一：审题
审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到五个方面：一审主题（写什么），二审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态（时态中考两个扣一分，三个降一档），四审人称（别犯低级错误），五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题）
步骤二：打草稿
中考一定要打草稿，两大优势
1中考不准在试卷更改，涂改带、橡皮、胶条（囧）、小刀（我小时候想都没想过），而中考时落笔错误是难免的，涂改就会后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免这个情况了。
2 正式写作是对草稿的在梳理，语言的在锤炼。
步骤三：正文写作
做到两点，一要凝练，而要变化。文章80—100字为宜，一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、50个句型和词组搭配。
步骤四：检查：
很多学生考试都会检查，但总是不能找到自己的错误。原因很简单，方法不对：
英语写作检查的原则：
1 内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档。
2 语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。
3 变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化。
中考英语作文万能格式佳句11句
1.We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ?
我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗？
2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today .
过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ......
一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......
4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution .
认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face .
这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。
6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place .
简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。
7.Lost time is never found again.
岁月既往，一去不回。
8.Everybody should have a dream.
每个人都该有个梦想.
9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.
抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
10.Failure is the mother of success.
失败乃成功之母。
11.Let's look on the bright side.
让我们往好处想吧。
最后，送上一波高分范文福利，记得收藏转发噢~
第一篇
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
【优秀满分范文】
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇
【写作要求】
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。
【优秀满分范文】
Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.
第三篇
【写作要求】
最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。
原因
赞成
帮助他人是美德；
帮助他人就是帮助自己；
反对
怕陷入麻烦；
怕被误解；
你的观点?（至少两点）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
【优秀满分范文】
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．
However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．
In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．
第四篇
【写作要求】
某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：
1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；
2. 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。
5. 有问题时，我们…
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。
【优秀满分范文】
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
第五篇
【写作要求】
学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：
1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时
间都奉献给了工作；
4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。
5. 我希望 ……
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。
【优秀满分范文】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
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