考前，就背這些範文 分類研讀書面表達真題，助飛高考寫作

考前，就背這些範文

分類研讀書面表達真題，助飛高考寫作

高考的腳步越來越近，許多考生仍因為自己作文的強差人意而惴惴不安，而又無從入手。筆者以為，越是臨近，要快速提高本部分的秘訣仍在於潛心研讀、背誦一些真題和模擬題範文，對其進行分類整理，強記各類書信對應的開頭和結尾，尤其不同體裁的關鍵用詞。

對於一篇好的作文，筆者認為有2點尤為重要：

1.審體裁。明確體裁，方能明確文章開頭的寫作目的以及結尾段的關鍵用詞或可套用句型；另外，這點有時對信件表述所使用的語氣也非常重要；

2.養成將寫作內容分為3段的模式和思維習慣，並明確對三個段落的內容進行劃分。第一段包含：

(1)考慮是否需要進行自我介紹（有的需要，有的不需要）；

(2)判斷需交代的背景信息及其位置。（尤其對於書信，有的背景信息置於寫信目的之前，如邀請信，求職信等；而有的置於其後，如道歉信中的因何事道歉）

對此，作者整理了近10年一些高考真題和部分模擬題，希望能在最後階段能助各位考生一臂之力。建議大家多留意各提供範文的開頭結尾和筆者加下劃線部分，尤其是其用詞；另外，大家不妨多多研讀範文中的一些狀語和定語的處理，揣摩一些非謂語或介詞短語，甚至於插入語的用法，爭取從中獲益。

一、邀請信

【2016•新課標全國II 】

假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信，請他提供作品。信的內容包括：

1.主題：環境保護；

2.展覽時間；

3.投稿郵箱：[email protected].

Dear Peter,

An International High School Student Photography Show, organized by our school photography club, is to be held from June 15th and last for three weeks with the theme of environmental protection. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. Therefore, I am writing to invite you to take part in the activity.

Amateur photographer as you are, I know you really take good pictures and that you have always been longing to do something for environmental protection. I sincerely hope that you can spare some time to select some on that theme and let more people enjoy your wonderful works. If interested, you can send your photos to [email protected].

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【2015•新課標全國II】

假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：

1. 出發及返回時間；

2. 活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

Dear Lucy,

Aiming to express our love and care for the elderly, we students intend to go on a visit to the nearby nursing home for the Double Ninth Festival next Saturday. It is a meaningful activity because it is the day for the elderly in our culture and I am writing to invite you to join us.

As is scheduled, we will leave school by bus at 9:00 a.m. and be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. After our arrival, there will be many activities, such as making dumplings and cakes, giving performances, playing games, and so on.

Please let me know whether it’s convenient for you to come with us. Looking forward to your joining us.

Yours

Li Hua

點評：這2篇都屬於邀請信。邀請信的要點是：1.因何事邀請對方參加該活動；2.邀請人需瞭解的與活動相關的信息；3.希望對方能應邀參加。建議背誦範文的開頭段與結尾段，可以作為此類書信的萬能句子。

二、求助信

【2016•新課標全國I】

假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua, one of your students last term, and I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company in the approaching summer holiday. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. However, it is the first time that I have written an application and resume, so I am not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. I would appreciate it if you could take some time to go through my application letter and resume attached and make some necessary changes.

Extremely thankful for that and looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【2007全國卷Ⅰ】

假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，並說明為什麼選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：

1. 年齡；

2. 性別；

3. 愛好（旅遊、運動、寵物等）。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to see whether it is convenient for you to do me a favor.

Aiming to improve my English as well as learning more about western cultures, I expect to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who not only is interested in traveling and swimming, but also has a pet dog as I do. I believe that it will be a great pleasure to have such a friend, with whom I can share our traveling experiences or how to take care of pets.

I would appreciate it if you could introduce me such a perfect pen friend. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

點評：這2篇都屬於求助信。對於求助信，交代清楚要對方幫忙的事件是很重要的。另外，此類信件還有注意語言表述的委婉和禮貌性。值得一提的是，第3篇第二部分其實屬於介紹類文體，針對此類文體，若能靈活運用非謂語和介詞短語，將為您的作文增色不少。如：In the shape of a diamond, each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, these knots look extremely beautiful but are only 12.99 US dollars each.中，In the shape of a diamond介詞短語來說明中國結的形狀；each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide獨立主格結構說明其長寬。

三、諮詢信

【2014 全國卷I】

假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學習英語，為期六週。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況（箭頭所指內容）

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student in China. I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the approaching summer vacation. I’ve seen your ad. on the Internet, and quite interested, I am writing for more/further relevant information about your six -week English course.

First of all, would you please tell me when the course will start and how many students a class consists of? Besides, how many class hours are there per week and how much I have to pay for the course? In addition, I wonder whether accommodation is included. Meanwhile will students live with a host family or in student accommodation /university dormitory?

I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours

Li Hua

【2005全國卷Ⅰ 】

假定你是李華，正在英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅遊。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內容）。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

Dear Sir/Madame,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a language training course at Oxford University. I happened to come across your ad. on the Internet.Quite interested, I am writing for more/further information about the day tour to London.

Above all, I wonder whether there is a discount for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover all the entrance fees for visiting the places listed as well as lunch? Besides, would you be kind enough to inform me when we will return? Last but not least, is there any time for shopping? I have been longing to have a look at the big stores in London.

I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：詢問信類的開頭和結尾基本可以當萬能句型強記下來，另外第二段的詢問信息部分，建議可以採用陳述與疑問句混用的形式，增強句子的多變性。

四、約稿信

【2015全國I 】

書面表達（滿分25分）

假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：

1. 欄目介紹；

2. 稿件內容；

3. 稿件長度：約400詞；

4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to invite/ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” column/section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. And I wonder whether it is convenient for you to write something on the culture in your part of the United States. We would especially welcome articles concerning how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, as well as the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

Looking forward to your early reply and seeing your interesting articles.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：約稿信一般開門見山，說明寫信目的。第二段的著眼於所要稿件的內容類型和其他要求。

五、招聘啟事

【2010遼寧卷 】

你校學生會需招聘一名留學生做英語學習顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內容主要包括：

——母語是英語，漢語流利者優先

——解答英語學習問題，協助組織英語活動

——每週4小時，報酬面議

——聯繫人：李華（Tel:13011223344）

English Advisor Wanted

The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term.

The advisor’s main tasks include helping answer students’ questions in learning English and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, and so on. The applicant should be a native English speaker. Furthermore, the candidate who also has a good command of Chinese is preferred. Besides, the advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

Student Union

點評：招聘啟事要點：1. 招聘職位的基本信息（招聘單位和招聘對象，有時還會涉及職位性質， 如全職，兼職或志願者工作）2. 職位職責和要求 3.簡要涉及福利待遇，並提供聯繫方式。

七、求職信

【2011遼寧卷 】

假定你是李華，將於今年七月從新星外語學校畢業，你從報紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書，你很感興趣。請給該公司寫一封求職信，包括下列要點：

1.年齡；

2.學習情況及英語水平；

3.興趣和特長；

4.性格特點。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. Quite interested in this position, I’ am writing to apply for it.

I, aged 18 years old, am to graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. As an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Besides, I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot and like sports as well as outdoor activities. Last but not least, being a good team player, I'm easy to get along with.

I would appreciate it if I could have a chance to work for you. Looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

點評：求職信有幾點是可以背一些萬能句子的，如信息來源，寫信目的和結尾。另外，對於第二段的主體部分，寫作時要注意：要點一定放在體現你所具有的，該職位所要求的相關能力上。

八、申請信

【2012 全國卷 I 】

假定你是李華，從互聯網上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內容主要包括:

I.自我介紹(包括英語能力);

2.參加意圖(介紹中國、瞭解其他國家);

3.希望獲准.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I learn from the Internet that a summer camp is to be held in Singapore and that students from different countries are welcome to take part in it. Quite interested, I am writing to apply to participate.

Having been learning English for 10 years, I speak fluent English. What’s more, I am really dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about other countries. Meanwhile, it is also my great honour to introduce anything relevant to China if others are interested.

I would highly appreciate it if I could be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply!

Yours;

Li Hua

點評：注意申請信與求職信的區別，尤其是第二部分，求職信以體現自己符合某職位要求為主；而申請信，是以希望自己的某種訴求被通過、獲准為主，注意兩者尤其是結尾處的區別。

九、預約信

【2011新課標】

假設你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據學校規定，你需書面預約，請按下列要點寫一封信：

1.本人簡介；

2.求助內容；

3.約定時間；

4.你的聯繫方式（Email：[email protected]；phone：12345678）。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Coming across some difficulties and informed that the Learning Center provides help for students in need, I’m writing to ask for help.

This being my first experience to attend a foreign school, I have some difficulty in taking notes in classes. Besides, I have no idea of how to make good use of the library. Therefore, I would appreciate any suggestions you may have. I wonder whether it is convenient for you to make an appointment with me on Tuesday mornings or Friday afternoons since I have no class then. You can get in touch with me by sending an email to [email protected] or calling me at 12345678.

I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：

這個預約信其實是求助與預約的結合版：既要交代清楚存在的問題，又要說明預約見面的時間和聯繫方式。對於預約信的內容應包括：1.因何事預見對方；2.預約見面的時間/地點和聯繫方式。

十、建議信

【2008全國卷II】

假定你是李華, 你的英國朋友Peter來信向你諮詢如何才能學好中文. 請你根據下列要點寫回信. 要點:

1. 參加中文學習班;

2. 看中文書刊、電視；

3. 學唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中國朋友。

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Also, it is my great pleasure to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Above all, I feel it significant to take a Chinese course, which not only gives you a good chance to learn from the teachers but also practice what you learn with your fellow students. Besides, it would be a good idea to watch some TV programs as well as read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese or try to learn and sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, I suggest that you make more Chinese friends, who will also help you improve your Chinese.

I sincerely hope that you will find the advice I share above helpful. May you make great progress in Chinese!

Yours,

Li Hua

十一、回信告知信息/轉告信息

【2016屆山東滕州一中學高三10月月考】

假如你是英國的Jack，你的朋友李曉打算到國外留學，他寫信詢問你什麼樣的中國學生最受國外高校青睞。請你根據下列要點給對方寫一封回信：

1.語言是道硬門檻；

2.適應能力很重要；

3.興趣愛好被看重；

4.要有社會責任感。

Dear Li Xiao,

I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Also, it is my great pleasure to share some information concerning what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities with you.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential/vital, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment also counts a lot

. In addition, most colleges and universities attach great importance to students’ interests, for they have a lot to do withsuccess. Last but not least, those who are willing toshoulder/take/undertake social responsibility are especially respected and welcome.

I sincerely hope that you will find all I share above helpful. May you succeed and be admitted into an ideal university.

Yours，

Jack

【2012全國卷II 】

假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你校現在需招聘外教，請給他寫封信，告知招聘信息。內容主要包括：

1.教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英語等

2.授課對象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎）

3. 工作量： — 每週 12 學時，任選三門課 — 擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）

Dear Peter,

I remember you once told me you were interested in teaching in China. And it happens that our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior students. Therefore, I am writing to inform you of some relevant information.

First of all, the teacher, once employed, can choose three of the following four courses--Speaking, Writing, America Today and Britain Today, and works 12 hours a week. Besides, the students to take these courses all have at least three years of English learning experiences. Apart from teaching, the teacher is also required to work as an advisor in our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.

Please write soon and let me know whether you are interested. If you have any other questions, I will also be more than happy to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：這是兩篇信息轉告信，但仍有區別，一封是回覆類，一封直接寫信告知招聘信息。注意它們與前一類建議信的區別，最為明顯的一點就是語言的表述更具客觀性，用詞遣句不帶有濃烈的個人觀點態度。

十二、道歉信

【2016全國卷3】

假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。

Dear Bob,

I am writing to apologize for not being able to go to Xinhua Bookstore by appointment this Friday afternoon, because I have just been informed of attending an important class meeting that afternoon.

I’m extremely sorry for that and I wonder whether it is convenient for you to make it another time and go on Saturday morning. I hope we can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. And how about meeting at 8:30 outside the school gate? If you are not available, please inform me of it so that we can set some other time for that?

Once again I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：道歉信注意其內容銜接：寫信目的：道歉（為何事道歉）—原因—如何彌補—再次表明歉意

十三、感謝信

假設你叫李華，現是武漢大學的一名新生。請你根據以下提示，給你中學的英語老師李老師寫一封感謝信，表達對他的愛戴和尊敬。要點如下：

1.對英語李老師教學的評價。

2.回顧在校時你的心情。

3.對老師的理解和祝願。

Dear Mr Li,

I am Li Hua, now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you for helping me improve my English.

I still remember the days when you taught me English. Thanks to your creative work, my English has been improved greatly. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations and the high expectations made me depressed. Luckily, you often encouraged me not to give up. Without your assistance and encouragement, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college and realized my dream.

Now I really understand you and sincerely thank you again for what you have done for me. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. May you lead a happy life!

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：感謝信寫作要點：1. 因何事向對方表示感謝；2. 事情的具體細節；3.再次表達感謝/向對方表達美好祝願。

十四、投訴信

你是李華，兩週前你從網上一套書蟲系列讀物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到貨，且包裝破損，數量不足。請就此向網店客服寫郵件投訴。要點如下：

1. 介紹購物情況

2. 反映存在問題

3. 提出解決方案

Dear Dir,

I am one of your customers. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the poor Web service I have received.

I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

It’s my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and have the matter settled properly, giving me a full refund or delivering a new set of books to me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

點評：投訴信的要點：1. 因何事向對方提出投訴（make a complaint about…/complain about…）；2. 具體存在的問題； 3. 希望對方能重視並妥善解決這個問題。

十五、留言條

[2009年全國卷（寧夏、海南卷）]

假設你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家裡。今天的房東Mrs Wilson不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs Wilson寫一留言條，內容包括：

1.外出購物

2.替房東還書

3.Tracy來電話留言：

(1) 咖啡屋（Bolton coffee）見面取消

(2) 此事已告知Susan

June 7th

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping and won’t be back until about 5:00 p.m.. I have taken the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt extremely sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. And she has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：此留言條為提綱類書面表達，只需將所列內容要點交代清楚即可（切記不可遺漏）。另外做好信息點之間的銜接、過渡則將為你的文章加分。

十六、郵件/通知

[2009年全國卷（遼寧卷）]

假定你住在一個涉外小區。社區委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將週末農家採摘活動的安排傳達給住戶。

要點：

時間：下週六上午8：00至11：00

內容：採摘蘋果

報名：辦公室，下週四下午5：00前

提示：帶帽子、手套

Dear neighbors,

We are more than happy to announce that next Saturday morning we'll have a public activity, picking apples in a village 8 kilometers away from our community. It will last three hours and we will leave by bus at 8:00 a.m. and be back around 11 am.. Those who would like to participate can sign up in the community office before 5:00 pm. next Thursday. Besides, it is suggested that you wear a hat and gloves to protect yourselves well. Everyone is warmly welcome to take part in it.

The Community Office

點評：這封郵件（其實郵件也是書信，只不過是當前互聯網時代下更便捷的一種信息互通方式罷了）也是提綱類書面表達。從內容看其實是一個通知，若此篇的要求是寫一則社區通知，則將Dear neighbors改為NOTICE置於中間即可。通知往往針對某活動，所以需交代清楚通知的事件、對象，活動的時間、地點（有時也包括報名方式）和注意事項即可。

十七、發言稿

【2014陝西卷】

假定你是中學生李華。美國一箇中學校長代表團即將訪問你校並出席英語周的一項活動。請根據寫作要點和寫作要求寫一篇歡迎詞。

寫作要點：

1.表示對客人的歡迎；

2.介紹此項活動（如活動目的、內容等）；

3.表達對客人的祝願。

Dear American Guest,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express/extend our warmest welcome to you. It is our great honour to have your presence here and it is also my great honour to deliver a speech here, saying something about the English Week Activities.

As is scheduled, we have English Talent Show at the Student Centre at two o’clock this afternoon. With the aim of developing our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking, the show consists of various interesting performances and games, such as recitation, singing, story-telling, word spelling and so on. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I am convinced that we students will benefit a lot from your presence.

I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you for your listening.

點評：發言稿包括歡迎致辭/演講稿等，語言表述要注意發言者需面對聽眾，另外發言通常圍繞某一話題。

後記：其實在歷年的高考中還有一些介紹類文體（如2013年遼寧卷介紹中秋節，2009年全國卷介紹北京前門大街，2006年全國卷介紹學校圖書館，甚至在2013請求朋友幫忙賣中國結中對中國結的介紹）和描述類文體（如2014年全國卷Ⅱ中對我未來生活的描述），針對此類文體，

一、要做好提綱，明確自己的寫作內容；

二、適當添加相關信息（注意相關二字，筆者認為添加的信息必須能體現文章中要突出的內容或起銜接作用，否則不添加）；

三、表述中在與前兩個要求不衝突的前提下，恰當地使用同位語，介詞短語（尤其是as/with短語），非謂語，複合句的將為你的文章添色不少。

筆者將就所提及真題列一些句子以參考：

1. Falling on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most popular traditional Chinese festivals.

2. I will be twenty ­eight years old by then and I am likely to have my own family, probably with a lovely child.

3. In my free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games.

4.

Standing for friendship, love and good luck, Chinese knots in China can serve as great gifts to friends or decorations hung in the houses.

5. In the shape of a diamond, each about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, these knots look extremely beautiful but are only 12.99 US dollars each.

6. As a famous street of over 600 years old, Qianmen Street is 800 meters long with more than 300 shops.

7. Inside the library stands many shelves full of books on different subjects as well as lots of newspapers and magazines.

8. Amateur photographer as you are, I know you really take good pictures and that you have always been longing to do something for environmental protection.

9. An International High School Student Photography Show,

organized by our school photography club, is to be held from June 15th and last for three weeks with the theme of environmental protection.

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