雅思寫作中用分詞加分,但要注意幾點!

大家都知道句子多樣性是雅思寫作的一個考察重點,所以考生們就絞盡腦汁的用這一點來進行加分,比如說分詞,分詞是提升語言多樣性很重要的一點,但也是難點和易錯點,那麼小編今天就給大家說說分詞用在那些方面來加分,但需要注意的易錯點。

雅思寫作中用分詞加分,但要注意幾點!

現在分詞替換:

一、定語從句

在寫作中,現在分詞短語常常可以用來替換句中的定語從句,使句子結構更精簡,形成多樣化的句式。現在分詞既可修飾人,也可修飾物,被修飾的成分可以是主語、賓語或其他名詞性質的成分。

例如:

1.Thenumber of international students coming to western countries increased greatlyin recent years.

替換-The number of international students who came to western countries increased greatly in recent years。

2.Anew stadium coveringan area of 10 square kilometres will be built in the north of thecity.

替換-A new stadium which covers an area of 10 square kilometreswill be built in the north of the city。

就如以上這樣現在分詞作定語成分時,它所對應的定語從句的謂語可以是一個一般時態的動詞。

有或者是這樣:

Onecan hardly imagine the number of bacteria growing insidea refrigerator.

替換-One can hardly imagine the number of bacteria that are growing inside arefrigerator.

現在分詞作定語成分時,它所對應的定語從句的謂語也可以是一個進行時態的動詞。

注意點:

分詞也不是絕對的可以替換。

例如:

The man who Tim is meeting for lunch is from Taiwan.

此句的定語從句who Tim is meeting for lunch不可用分詞結構替換,即絕不能改成:The man Tim meeting for lunch is from Taiwan. 因為分詞meeting的邏輯主語並不是定語從句先行詞the man,而是Tim,所以這是完全錯誤的說法。

例如:

The issue that club members are being asked to vote on at tonight’s meeting is that of a fee increase.

絕不可改成:The issue club members being asked to vote on at tonight’s meeting is that of a fee increase.分詞being asked的邏輯主語是club members,並不是定語從句先行詞the issue。

雅思寫作中用分詞加分,但要注意幾點!

在替換中表因果也是一個提分技巧,即當分詞所指行為或事件引發了主句所指的事件或行為,可以替換定語從句。

例如:

The snow which fell overnight has caused traffic chaos.

替換-The snow falling overnight has caused traffic chaos.

這句話有先後,還表因果,但是也有不可的。

例如:

The snow which fell overnight has turned to ice.

這裡就不能夠用分詞替換,因為這隻表先後而沒有表因果。

還有就是情態動詞做謂語的定語從句,不可用分詞替換。

例如:

There are a number of people who should be asked.

二、狀語從句

現在分詞的另一重要用法是充當狀語,通常用以表示原因或時間。

1.表示原因:相當於一個原因狀語從句

例如:

Staying up latelast night, he felt asleep in the meeting this morning.

替換-As hestayed up late last night, he felt asleep in themeeting this morning。

2.表示時間:相當於一個時間狀語從句

例如:

While constructing the new residential area, the workers found anold tomb from the Ming Dynasty.

替換-Whilethey were constructing the new residential area, theworkers found an old tomb from the Ming Dynasty。

注意點:

現在分詞作狀語,表示‘在做某事的過程中,發生了某事或做某事。’這時前面保留when,while等連詞。

例如:

Knowing thegovernment's new environment protection policy, many high-techcompanies started developing products that are environmental-friendly.

替換-Whenthey know the government's new environment protection policy, many high-tech companies started developing products that areenvironmental-friendly。

以上就是小編給大家分享的關於分詞在意思是寫作中的用法注意,你都知道嗎?


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