Why do you choose to attend the national post-graduate entrance examination(研究生入学考试)?
回答问题一定要有逻辑！有逻辑！有逻辑！ 重要的事情说三遍。作为研究生，科研能力是非常重要的，要知道一个没有逻辑的人是很难做好科研的，千万不要给导师留下这样的印象。一般都是采用总--分--总结构。大家体会一下：
（先总说）There are several reasons. (先说一句总结句)
（第一点）The first reason is, I have been deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere when I came here last summer. In my opinion, as one of the most famous university in our country, it provide people with enough room to get further enrichment. （夸夸一下你要考的大学，这个应该不难吧！）
（第二点）The second one is I am longing for doing researchin +专业领域 throughout my life. Its a pleasure to to be with my favourite subject for a lifetime. I suppose this is the most important factor in my decision.（我想做科研，这是我兴趣所在，做这件事情，我很幸福，很满足！）
Thirdly, I learnt a lot from my job during the past two years. However, I think further study in still urgent for me to realize self-value. Life is precious. It is necessory to seize any chance for self-development, especially in this competitive modern world.（从过去的工作经验中，得出结论自己需要进一步提升自己）
（最后总结）In a word, I am looking forward to making a solid foundation for further profession after two years study here.
这上面用得好的词语和结构有：
- be deeply impressed 被深深感染了，对...留下了深刻的印象
- as one of the most famous university, 作为最好的大学之一，
- get further enrichment 进一步提升
- I am longing for ...我一直渴望。。。
- It's a pleasure to be... 做。。。工作是一件让人高兴的事情
- I suppose， 我认为
- ...is still urgent for me ...对我来说仍然是非常紧急的事情。
- realize self-value实现个人价值
- in this competitive modern world 如今竞争如此激烈
- in a word , 总而言之
- make a solid foundation 打下坚实的基础
灵活掌握这些结构，学会运用，你就可以自己组织语言了！ 小伙伴们加油！
因为疫情，复试延期了，预调剂被叫停了，但是该来的终会来的，不要因为这段时间自己浮躁不安，犹豫不决，丢掉了最后到来的宝贵机会。
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