英語作文寫不好,有沒有優秀書信類作文參考一下?

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大家好,今天我們一起聊聊讓大家頭疼的“寫作”。我們先從

書信開始,從“邏輯思維”和“語言表達”兩方面來攻克它。

拿到一個題目,我們首先要去思考這是什麼類型的書信,才好“對症下藥”。那麼,常見的書信類型都有哪些呢?

大家可以清楚地看到,現階段常見的書信類型比較固定,且每一種都有它對應的“話術”和“模式”,這也是和具體的生活情景息息相關的。

同時,書信類型的不同,也決定了它的“腔調”不同。比如,寫給朋友的信可以比較隨意,而求職信、道歉信一類則要比較正式、誠懇。那麼,不同“腔調”的書信都要注意些什麼呢?我們也給大家做了總結:

在分析出書信的類型和腔調之後呢,我們就要開始進入到具體的書信構思中去。這個時候就要充分調動我們的“邏輯思維”能力。英文書信寫作,並不是信馬由韁,想到哪算哪,而是要有一個內在的邏輯鏈條

對於一封信而言,我們首先就要禮貌地表示來意,然後開門見山,點出寫信目的。然後,我們就要進入到“敘述”的部分,也就是結合我們的寫作目的,完整、清晰地講清楚你寫信的來龍去脈,力求內容清楚曉暢有邏輯,這也是書信的“重頭戲”部分。在敘述的時候可以採用“5W1H”的方法,也就是What(什麼),When(時間),Why(原因),Who(人物),Where(地點),How(方式),在書信的主體段落構建中,要充分考慮到這幾個要素。最後,我們要進行點題,再一次總結概括自己的訴求或是表明自己寫信的主題,讓這封信看起來“有始有終”。

在寫信的時候,我們要學會“預設”一個對象,也就是說我們要去思考如何最清楚、最簡潔地表達清楚自己的意思,讓收信人準確get到我們的點。如果能夠達到這一點,其實我們的寫作目的就完成了一大半。這也再次對同學們的邏輯思維能力提出了要求,寫信之前一定要構思好、想清楚,可以先用中文的思維去搭建框架,再將具體語言轉化成英文。

具體的每一步該怎麼做?一起看看下面的表格。

完成了“邏輯構思”的部分,我們的寫作框架就清楚了。接下來我們還有另一個任務,也就是“語言”。語言的打磨非一日之功,它涉及到對於詞彙、語法和句法的精準應用,大家可以慢慢來。貓老師比較推薦的方法,就是細讀範文,仔細分析範文的每一句話運用到了什麼語言點,用的怎麼樣?然後去思考,自己如何在寫作中去運用它們?如果自己的基礎知識還不過關,如何去彌補?堅持精讀範文,你的語言絕對會有質的提升。

狀元貓範文精讀

今天我們從“邏輯思維”和“語言表達”兩方面幫助大家拆解了書信寫作。其實寫作並沒有大家想象的那麼難,但它是英語知識的“集大成”,需要大家多找方法、多動腦筋 。一起加油吧!


槍哥相聲英語


不知道你是初中還是高中層次學生,小編自己英語也不好,幫你找一些比較好的書信類作文供你看看,希望有所幫助。

1. 假如你叫李明。你的好友Mark生病了,在家複習迎考。以下是學校關於期末考試的通知,請根據該通知寫一份120左右的e-mail給Mark,告訴他考試的情況。

Notice on the Final Exams

時間:下週四——the last day of the exam week

內容:五個問題中任意回答三個;寫作文一篇

複習範圍:課本,期中考試試卷和筆記。

計分:期末考試佔55%;期中考試佔25%; 研究性課程佔20%。

注意:

1. 開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數;

2. 生詞:研究性課程research work ,分數grade。

Dear Mark,

It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us. __________________________

【參考範文】

Dear Mark,

It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lesson with us. The final exams will be held next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week. What is different about the exam is hat it consists of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions andwritingarticles. We are supposed to go over our midterm exam papers, textbooks and class notesto prepare for it. The grade is made up of three parts. The final exams will make up 55% ofour grade, the research work 20 and the midterm exams 25% of it.Please feel free to contact if you are still not clear about it.Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam.

2.

Dear ...,

  Nice to hear from you !I can imagine that you are now enjoying your life and work from your letter.I'm fine too,everything goes well.How's the weather up there?It's nice here.The sun is shining brightly and the wind is breeze biowing.I really enjoy the feeling of wind blowing through my cheek.These days I plant a potted flower,but I don't know its name,now it sprouted.The buds are so green.I like green so much.Which color do you like best?I think it will blossom in a few days,then I will send you the photo of it.Are you looking forward to receive it?

  I'm so miss you. I had a quarrel with my friend a few days ago,because she broke the cup you gave me.I love the cup so much because it's the only present you have gave me.I'm so upset now.Do you think I should apologize to her?

  In next week,we will have a final text.I feel so nervious because my math is so poor.I'm afraid I will fail the exam.What can I do?Can you give me some suggestions?Best wishes,write Soon !

  Yours

  XXX

 

3. 一封求助信

  Dear Ralph,

  I’m a middle school student. My name is Li Hua. I once had a very happy family, but now everything has changed because of my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and did housework every day. However, he is now quite a different person. He plays majiang all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just cannot concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father.

  Could you help me and tell me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

高考英語書信類寫作萬能模板(超強模板,考試直接套用)

書信:

【高分套路】

但凡應試書信,逃不出三種段落:

開頭段:四大內容

1、問候;

2、自我介紹;

3、寫信背景;為什麼會寫這封信

4、寫信目的;寫這封信想達到什麼目的

中間段:具體問題+具體分析;

結尾段:客套話;

口訣:

開門見山說意圖

諮詢建議123

不同內容可分段

感謝客氣不可少

期待回信成老套

【經典套話】

(一)開頭段:靈活地去寫四種內容:

1、問候;

How are you doing?

How is everything going?

How is life treating you?

2、自我介紹;

I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school.

I am LiHua, who...

【李華同志的個人簡歷】

由於我們在考場上的身份幾乎年年都是李華,因此我們在這裡有必要了解一下李華同志的一些個人情況。當然,這位同志的個人情況是可以有我們自己人為設置的。為了給閱卷老師留下一個好印象,我們將李華同志的個人簡歷概括為:一個人見人愛的好孩子。

hardworking

diligent

help my parents to do housework

take part in CCTV national English speech competition

won the second prize in CCTV national English speech competition

vice monitor

vice chairman of the students’ union

worked as a volunteer for the Olympic Games

worked as a volunteer for the 21st century

have many foreign friends and often chat with them happily in starbark.

3、寫信背景(寫信的緣由)

I heard that ...

My teacher told me...

I am informed that...

I learned that...我得知...

I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that...

You said in your last letter that...

4、寫信目的;

Now, I am writing to do sth.

Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.

Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth.

【七種最常見書信的“寫信目的”部分的最佳寫法】

自薦信:

Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position.

感謝信:

Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.

邀請信:

Now, I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor).

建議信:

Now, I am writing to give you a hand.

求助信:

Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.

道歉信:

Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.

告知信:

Now, I am writing to tell you about the details.

(二)中間段:具體問題(主題句)+具體分析(拓展句)

【六種最常見書信的“中間段”最佳寫法】

自薦信:寫自己的優勢

寫法一:

There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...

寫法二:

I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...

寫法三:

I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly, ...Thirdly,...

感謝信:寫對方為你所做的事

Every time I (看照片、看錄像、看那段時間的日記、回憶那段經歷), I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to (對方做的第一件事). Besides, you (對方做的第二件事), which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember (對方做的第三件事), considering that,(第三件事情的意義). Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.

邀請信:描述具體的活動內容,如活動主題、意義、地點、時間、參加者和其它事項;

Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活動主題或活動目的,如:the theme of the contest is 'human and the nature', which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. )Moreover, (活動的地點和時間,如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.) What's more,(活動人員,如: ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.)Finally, (其他信息,如:if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. )

建議信:寫給對方的具體建議

寫法一:

There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...

寫法二:

Immediate and effective measures must be put into practice. First and foremost,... Additonally,...Last but not least,...

寫法三:

The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,...

求助信:寫具體需要幫助的事項

Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,(困難一),which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,(困難二), for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter. Finally,...

l 常用句型:(做某事有困難)

1、I have trouble in doing sth.

2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.

3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.

l 常見困難:

【生活方面】

與人相處 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.(和我的同學/新老師/父母相處)

把握時間 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. (安排和利用每天的時間去做有意義的事情)

明確目標 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. (知道我生命的目的和未來的目標,以便每天充滿激情地過著“目標驅動”的生活)

【學習方面】

不懂語法 have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.

進步太慢 find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.

精力有限 can't be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.

道歉信:描述不能或沒能做到某事(如:赴約、還書、提供某種幫助)的原因

一般要以記敘文的形式寫出以下三個內容:

1: 不能做某事的緣由;

2:對方能夠諒解你的理由

I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice.

3:衷心希望對方能夠諒解;

英語書信的種類很多,但可以把它們歸為兩大類,一類是私人書信(personal letters),另一類是商務書信(business letters),例如:申請信、求職信、推薦信、證明信、感謝信等。這些書信都有一定的寫作技巧,你可以將自己考試常考到的幾種列出來,分別寫出來一套模板來供考試時套用,這樣會高效有用很多的。


小白看職場


十五的湯圓

元宵節的煙花很好看,但抵不上湯圓的細膩清香。正想著湯圓,媽叫了,想吃湯圓快來幫手,包十個湯圓,自己能吃七個,包二十個,就吃十四個,以此例催。

我心裡想著要能包五十個,我可就有三十五個了,哈哈。。。今天吃不完,留下餐或是明天。

洗手後立既包了起來,一會皮厚,一會皮薄,甚至連餡都沒包住漏了出來。媽看我十在不行,不要我包。可要罰我寫三篇作文,這是其中的一篇?


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