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朱伟老师神预测|高分范文:上网时长(八)

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TOPIC

热点话题 八:中国网络零售购物交易额

重点表达

网络购物 online shopping

电子商务electronic commerce

交易额transaction volume

零售业 retailing (business)

行业巨头 industry giants

购买力 purchasing power

商业模式 business model

盈利模式 profit model

价格优势 price advantage

促销sales promotion

写作思路

每年“双十一”,国人都会见证电商销售新纪录的诞生。近年来,电子商务飞速发展,网络平台交易额逐年攀升,传统零售业受到巨大冲击。据统计,在2013年“双十一”当天,天猫的交易额相当于沃尔玛中国半年的销售额。本题选取了另一个和互联网相关的热门话题——电子商务热潮。考生可以先描述相关图表,然后分析电子商务热的原因:价格更低,选择更多,可用网络支付(不用带大把现金)等。

分析完原因之后,考生可以另起一段,写电子商务的发展趋势,也可以写传结零售商应该如何转变营销策略,与电子商务竞争,避免市场份额被进一步蚕食。

高分范文

The bar chart provides China’s domestic online retail consumption over the past four years. In 2010, goods amounting to 500 billion Yuan were sold online in China, and the figure reached 800 billion Yuan in 2011. In the last year, over 1800 billion Yuan worth of commodities were purchased through the Internet.

These figures indicate that people in China are more willing to buy things via the Internet. First, the price of a certain product sold online is usually cheaper, even much cheaper than that sold in stores. Second, with the help of online transaction platforms, comparing similar products is much easier than doing so in supermarkets. Finally, when you decide to buy something online, you can pay for it by credit card rather than by cash, so you don’t have to bring a large volume of cash while shopping in a nearby store.

The boom of the online retail industry poses a threat to traditional brick-and-mortar retail businesses. Wal-Mart, the world's largest retail corporation, has closed several of its local markets in some Chinese cities. It seems that companies like Wal-Mart need to change their business model to curb the decline of consumers.

参考译文

此柱状图提供了过去四年中国国内网络零售消费额数据。2010年,通过网络销售的零售商品额为5000亿元,到2011年,上升到8000亿元。2013年,互联网平台销售商品总值超过18000亿元。

这些数字说明,中国人更愿意通过互联网购买商品。首先,同样一件商品,在网上的售价通常比实体店低不少。其次,通过互联网交易平台,对比相似产品比在超市里要容易许多。最后,在网上购买商品时,可以用信用卡而非现金支付,所以不用像在超市购物那样携带大量现金。

互联网零售业的极速发展给传统零售业造成了威胁。作为世界上最大的零售业公司,沃尔玛已经关闭了它在中国一些城市的卖场。看来,像沃尔玛这样的公司需要转变营销模式,以挽回客户流失的局面。

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