英语作文写不好,有没有优秀书信类作文参考一下?

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大家好,今天我们一起聊聊让大家头疼的“写作”。我们先从

书信开始,从“逻辑思维”和“语言表达”两方面来攻克它。

拿到一个题目,我们首先要去思考这是什么类型的书信,才好“对症下药”。那么,常见的书信类型都有哪些呢?

大家可以清楚地看到,现阶段常见的书信类型比较固定,且每一种都有它对应的“话术”和“模式”,这也是和具体的生活情景息息相关的。

同时,书信类型的不同,也决定了它的“腔调”不同。比如,写给朋友的信可以比较随意,而求职信、道歉信一类则要比较正式、诚恳。那么,不同“腔调”的书信都要注意些什么呢?我们也给大家做了总结:

在分析出书信的类型和腔调之后呢,我们就要开始进入到具体的书信构思中去。这个时候就要充分调动我们的“逻辑思维”能力。英文书信写作,并不是信马由缰,想到哪算哪,而是要有一个

内在的逻辑链条

对于一封信而言,我们首先就要礼貌地表示来意,然后开门见山,点出写信目的。然后,我们就要进入到“叙述”的部分,也就是结合我们的写作目的,完整、清晰地讲清楚你写信的来龙去脉,力求内容清楚晓畅有逻辑,这也是书信的“重头戏”部分。在叙述的时候可以采用“5W1H”的方法,也就是What(什么),When(时间),Why(原因),Who(人物),Where(地点),How(方式),在书信的主体段落构建中,要充分考虑到这几个要素。最后,我们要进行点题,再一次总结概括自己的诉求或是表明自己写信的主题,让这封信看起来“有始有终”。

在写信的时候,我们要学会“预设”一个对象,也就是说我们要去思考如何最清楚、最简洁地表达清楚自己的意思,让收信人准确get到我们的点。如果能够达到这一点,其实我们的写作目的就完成了一大半。这也再次对同学们的逻辑思维能力提出了要求,写信之前一定要构思好、想清楚,可以先用中文的思维去搭建框架,再将具体语言转化成英文。

具体的每一步该怎么做?一起看看下面的表格。

完成了“逻辑构思”的部分,我们的写作框架就清楚了。接下来我们还有另一个任务,也就是“语言”。语言的打磨非一日之功,它涉及到对于词汇、语法和句法的精准应用,大家可以慢慢来。猫老师比较推荐的方法,就是细读范文,仔细分析范文的每一句话运用到了什么语言点,用的怎么样?然后去思考,自己如何在写作中去运用它们?如果自己的基础知识还不过关,如何去弥补?坚持精读范文,你的语言绝对会有质的提升。

状元猫范文精读

今天我们从“逻辑思维”和“语言表达”两方面帮助大家拆解了书信写作。其实写作并没有大家想象的那么难,但它是英语知识的“集大成”,需要大家多找方法、多动脑筋 。一起加油吧!


枪哥相声英语


不知道你是初中还是高中层次学生,小编自己英语也不好,帮你找一些比较好的书信类作文供你看看,希望有所帮助。

1. 假如你叫李明。你的好友Mark生病了,在家复习迎考。以下是学校关于期末考试的通知,请根据该通知写一份120左右的e-mail给Mark,告诉他考试的情况。

Notice on the Final Exams

时间:下周四——the last day of the exam week

内容:五个问题中任意回答三个;写作文一篇

复习范围:课本,期中考试试卷和笔记。

计分:期末考试占55%;期中考试占25%; 研究性课程占20%。

注意:

1. 开头已写好,不计入总词数;

2. 生词:研究性课程research work ,分数grade。

Dear Mark,

It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us. __________________________

【参考范文】

Dear Mark,

It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lesson with us. The final exams will be held next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week. What is different about the exam is hat it consists of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions andwritingarticles. We are supposed to go over our midterm exam papers, textbooks and class notesto prepare for it. The grade is made up of three parts. The final exams will make up 55% ofour grade, the research work 20 and the midterm exams 25% of it.Please feel free to contact if you are still not clear about it.Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam.

2.

Dear ...,

  Nice to hear from you !I can imagine that you are now enjoying your life and work from your letter.I'm fine too,everything goes well.How's the weather up there?It's nice here.The sun is shining brightly and the wind is breeze biowing.I really enjoy the feeling of wind blowing through my cheek.These days I plant a potted flower,but I don't know its name,now it sprouted.The buds are so green.I like green so much.Which color do you like best?I think it will blossom in a few days,then I will send you the photo of it.Are you looking forward to receive it?

  I'm so miss you. I had a quarrel with my friend a few days ago,because she broke the cup you gave me.I love the cup so much because it's the only present you have gave me.I'm so upset now.Do you think I should apologize to her?

  In next week,we will have a final text.I feel so nervious because my math is so poor.I'm afraid I will fail the exam.What can I do?Can you give me some suggestions?Best wishes,write Soon !

  Yours

  XXX

 

3. 一封求助信

  Dear Ralph,

  I’m a middle school student. My name is Li Hua. I once had a very happy family, but now everything has changed because of my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and did housework every day. However, he is now quite a different person. He plays majiang all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just cannot concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father.

  Could you help me and tell me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

高考英语书信类写作万能模板(超强模板,考试直接套用)

书信:

【高分套路】

但凡应试书信,逃不出三种段落:

开头段:四大内容

1、问候;

2、自我介绍;

3、写信背景;为什么会写这封信

4、写信目的;写这封信想达到什么目的

中间段:具体问题+具体分析;

结尾段:客套话;

口诀:

开门见山说意图

咨询建议123

不同内容可分段

感谢客气不可少

期待回信成老套

【经典套话】

(一)开头段:灵活地去写四种内容:

1、问候;

How are you doing?

How is everything going?

How is life treating you?

2、自我介绍;

I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school.

I am LiHua, who...

【李华同志的个人简历】

由于我们在考场上的身份几乎年年都是李华,因此我们在这里有必要了解一下李华同志的一些个人情况。当然,这位同志的个人情况是可以有我们自己人为设置的。为了给阅卷老师留下一个好印象,我们将李华同志的个人简历概括为:一个人见人爱的好孩子。

hardworking

diligent

help my parents to do housework

take part in CCTV national English speech competition

won the second prize in CCTV national English speech competition

vice monitor

vice chairman of the students’ union

worked as a volunteer for the Olympic Games

worked as a volunteer for the 21st century

have many foreign friends and often chat with them happily in starbark.

3、写信背景(写信的缘由)

I heard that ...

My teacher told me...

I am informed that...

I learned that...我得知...

I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that...

You said in your last letter that...

4、写信目的;

Now, I am writing to do sth.

Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.

Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth.

【七种最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法】

自荐信:

Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position.

感谢信:

Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.

邀请信:

Now, I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor).

建议信:

Now, I am writing to give you a hand.

求助信:

Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.

道歉信:

Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.

告知信:

Now, I am writing to tell you about the details.

(二)中间段:具体问题(主题句)+具体分析(拓展句)

【六种最常见书信的“中间段”最佳写法】

自荐信:写自己的优势

写法一:

There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...

写法二:

I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...

写法三:

I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly, ...Thirdly,...

感谢信:写对方为你所做的事

Every time I (看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历), I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to (对方做的第一件事). Besides, you (对方做的第二件事), which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember (对方做的第三件事), considering that,(第三件事情的意义). Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.

邀请信:描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项;

Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活动主题或活动目的,如:the theme of the contest is 'human and the nature', which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. )Moreover, (活动的地点和时间,如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.) What's more,(活动人员,如: ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.)Finally, (其他信息,如:if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. )

建议信:写给对方的具体建议

写法一:

There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...

写法二:

Immediate and effective measures must be put into practice. First and foremost,... Additonally,...Last but not least,...

写法三:

The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,...

求助信:写具体需要帮助的事项

Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,(困难一),which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,(困难二), for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter. Finally,...

l 常用句型:(做某事有困难)

1、I have trouble in doing sth.

2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.

3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.

l 常见困难:

【生活方面】

与人相处 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.(和我的同学/新老师/父母相处)

把握时间 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. (安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情)

明确目标 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. (知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活)

【学习方面】

不懂语法 have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing.

进步太慢 find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.

精力有限 can't be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.

道歉信:描述不能或没能做到某事(如:赴约、还书、提供某种帮助)的原因

一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容:

1: 不能做某事的缘由;

2:对方能够谅解你的理由

I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice.

3:衷心希望对方能够谅解;

英语书信的种类很多,但可以把它们归为两大类,一类是私人书信(personal letters),另一类是商务书信(business letters),例如:申请信、求职信、推荐信、证明信、感谢信等。这些书信都有一定的写作技巧,你可以将自己考试常考到的几种列出来,分别写出来一套模板来供考试时套用,这样会高效有用很多的。


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十五的汤圆

元宵节的烟花很好看,但抵不上汤圆的细腻清香。正想着汤圆,妈叫了,想吃汤圆快来帮手,包十个汤圆,自己能吃七个,包二十个,就吃十四个,以此例催。

我心里想着要能包五十个,我可就有三十五个了,哈哈。。。今天吃不完,留下餐或是明天。

洗手后立既包了起来,一会皮厚,一会皮薄,甚至连馅都没包住漏了出来。妈看我十在不行,不要我包。可要罚我写三篇作文,这是其中的一篇?


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