中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析

中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析

前言:广东省英语中考的作文题与信息归纳题的短文息息相关,在审题的时候准确定义写作对象和写作内容是书面表达拿高分的关键。此外,考场作文遵循一定的套路,写出完美的框架和使用一些高级的句式可以让文章获得更高档次的分值。

假如你是上文"共享小图"海报中的Bryan Lin,经过三个月的运营之后,请你写封电子邮件给Todd Bol,谈谈你对"共享小图"的感受,内容包括:

1 简单介绍你的身份,并说明写信意图;

2 这种图书馆的好处(两点);

3 "共享小图"存在的问题及其原因,并询问建议。

<strong>题目分析:

<strong>写作对象:Todd Bol,共享小图的创始人;

<strong>写作内容:介绍个人信息,评价共享小图,分析共享小图的问题与原因,询问建议。

<strong>对评价共享小图的提示:共享小图是一个社区项目,它的好处可以从改善邻里关系和改善人们的生活方式这两方面来考虑。

参考范文:(请重点记忆下划线的句子)

Dear Todd,

I hope this email finds you well. I am Bryan Lin, the director of the Little Free Library in Sunshine Park Community. I am writing to tell you my opinions about this project.

In my opinion, this Little Free Library has two advantages. First, it can help our neighbors form closer friendships with each other by exchanging(交换) books. Second, it can help more people get into the habit of reading books.

However, as time goes by, the books in the library get fewer and fewer because some people just take books but don't leave books. I wonder if you can give me some advice to deal with this problem.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Bryan Lim


中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析

同类型话题写作练习:社区话题,评价,分析

话题:时间银行:Time Bank

几年前,"时间银行"还是一个新鲜事物,如今,它在很多地方备受欢迎。假设你的社区也将尝试推行这一个项目,请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法,内容包括:

1 你所在的地方有开展"时间银行"吗?

2 你觉得这个项目有什么好处?(两点)

3 你是否愿意加入这个项目。若愿意,请你谈谈你的技能及需要;若不愿意,谈谈你的理由。

<strong>题目分析:

<strong>写作对象:本文属于个人分享观点,无特定阅读对象;

<strong>写作内容:有没有时间银行?评价时间银行,是否愿意加入时间银行及理由。

<strong>对评价时间银行的提示:时间银行是一个社区项目,它的好处可以从改善邻里关系和改善人们的生活方式这两方面来考虑。

参考范文:(请重点记忆下划线的句子)

Time Bank was invented in 1980 by an American professor of Law. We haven't carried out(开展、实施) Time Bank in our community yet.

In my opinion, this project has two advantages. First, it can encourage our neighbors to do more volunteer work in their free time. Second, it can help our neighbors form closer friendships by helping each other.

Since(既然) Time Bank is such a great project, I would like to join it very much. I am good at English and I can take care of pets. In exchange(交换), I hope someone can help me with my math homework and repair my bike.

I am looking forward to having this project in my community.


中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析

同类型作文拓展练习:假设你是一个参与者,评价、分析

1)无人零售店:the self-service retail station

假如你是上文"无人零售店"中的使用者Ms Xia,经过三个月的使用后,请你写封邮件给无人零售店的运营者,谈谈你对无人零售店使用的感受,内容包括:

1 简单介绍你的身份,并说明写信意图;

2 这种无人零售店的好处(两到三点);

3 无人零售店存在的问题及其原因,并询问建议。

Dear Sir,

I hope this email finds you well. I am Mrs Xia. I work in an office in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province. I often buy snacks and drinks from your self-service retail stations. Now I am writing to tell you my opinions about this kind of stations.

In my opinion, the self-service retail station has three advantages. First, it saves our time because we can get food without leaving the floor. Second, it saves our money because the prices of food in the stations are lower than those in most other stores. Third, it provides us more chances to know more people while buying food.

However, although I don't want to believe, some people steal(偷) food and drinks from the station because nobody else is there to stop them. I wonder if you can give me some advice to deal with this problem.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Ms Xia


中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析

2 NBA球星勒布朗.詹姆斯在2018年创办了I Promise School(IPS), 致力于帮助问题少年重返校园和健康成长。

假设你是上文中的Sammy Turner, 即将完成在IPS的初中学业。请你给LeBron James写一封邮件,谈谈你在该校读书的感想,内容包括:

1 表达对LeBron的感激之情和原因;

2 你在IPS读书的收获(三点);

3 你打算将来如何传播这种爱心。

Dear Mr. James,

I am Sammy Turner, a student at IPS. I want to say "thank you" to you. Because of you and IPS, I had the chance to go back to school and I have become a better person.

Since I studied at IPS, I have learned a lot. First, I have learned a lot of knowledge and make progress in study. Second, I always feel loved and important here and I have learned to help others. Third, with the help of IPS, I can face my problems bravely and deal with them in the right way.

In the future, I will never forget that I am a member of IPS. I will try my best to help more people in need. I wish the world could be a place full of love.

Best regards,

Sammy Turner


中考作文题型训练:介绍、评价、分析


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