考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8

同学们,再过最后2个月,就是2019考研的初试!无论是英语、政治以及数学等公共课,还是专业课复习,都已经进入到了决定胜负的冲刺关键期!

因此,韦林名师团的英语作文教学专家——杨凡达老师,特别为同学带来一节《We Learn写作宝典秋季课-第八周精讲小作文》的Open Day限时开放课程。


考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8/13分考研小作文



今年2019考研英语新大纲,英语一和英语二的写作部分,出现了一个比较明确的变化:

2019年考研 英语一

考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8/13分考研小作文


2019年考研 英语二

考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8/13分考研小作文


根据往期的真题来看,考研英语作文的命题规律,主要是以信件写作为主。备忘录和报告等题型,虽然也列入在考察范围之内,但是历年以来考察次数并不算频繁。

但是,今年的情况稍微有一些不同。无论是英语一还是英语二,考试大纲的小作文部分,都明确提到了备忘录、公务信函与报告等字眼。

杨凡达老师认为,不排除今年的考研,重点考察公务信函,报告以及备忘录的可能性。

备忘录以及各类公文的写作,一直是同学们的弱点。

我们先来学习一下这道出自《We Learn写作宝典秋季课》的例题:

Directions:

Imagine that you are the committee chairman for the upcoming urban sports meet held in your college. Write a memo to all the volunteers to remind them of dos and don’ts.

Do not write your own name in the letter. Use “Zhang Hua” instead.

这是关于举办运动会之前,作为组委会主席的你,需要为志愿者们写出一则备忘录。提醒志愿者们需要有哪些注意事项,规定与要求,以及其他事项的备注。


在开始写作之前,首先需要明确备忘录的基本格式:

TO 收信人:All volunteersFROM 写信人:Zhang Hua, the committee chairmanDATE 写信日期:Oct 26th, 2017SUBJECT 主题:The Fifth Urban Sports Meet

考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8/13分考研小作文

在公开课上,杨凡达老师列举出3篇来自韦林学员的范文。请同学们一篇篇认真阅读。

以下作文的划线部分,是杨凡达老师认为还可以继续改进的地方。

同学们可以选择其中的一篇,在文末评论区进行留言,提出你自己的看法。然后,再给出你所认为的得分。

第一篇作文:

The sports games will begin in this Sunday and we should pay attention to some important matters. First, please wear the recognized uniform and the logo hat which have prepared in the committee back office, on the second floor of the main stadium.

Second, please remember to sign in on time every day. If you have to leave, you should report to your direct superior and handover your work.

Third, please be familiar with the service manual to make sure that you can solve some problems in time. Fourth, get ready enough food and water, they can offer energy and help after works at once. Above all, please make our college proud.

第二篇作文:

Now that The Fifth Urban Sport Meet is coming. Here, I want to say a few word to everyone. First, you should always remember who you are because everything you say and do represents our school.

Second, you should wear your uniform and ID cards during working times. Considering that some students might lose their ID cards, the committee made three for each person.

Third, you should always keep smile on your face, and contact your teacher in case of emergency. And the most importantly, never lose your temper with spectators or athletes in the presence of passers-by.

然后,杨凡达老师给出一篇写作宝典内的范文。

建议同学们现在收藏这篇文章,仔细研读之后,扩展出一个专属于自己的“高分作文写作模板”:

The event will open in five days’ time and here are some important reminders. First, please remember to arrive on time every day and to sign in when you come.

Second, wear the uniform. If it becomes accidentally damaged or soiled, take it to the laundry room on the third floor of the north section of the main stadium, where you can exchange it for a new one.

Third, please don’t walk away from your position without permission. Report to your direct superior if you have to leave. Finally, never lose your temper with spectators as well as the athletes in the presence of passers-by. Above all, please make our college proud.


考前急救!75分钟,杨凡达老师教你写出8/13分考研小作文


考研英语的写作,想要拿到分数,必须经由三个循环步骤“看、写、改”。

如果你,出于时间紧迫而认为:“在作文上花时间,收获并不大。”

那么,杨凡达老师想反问一句:“凭什么你觉得在英语的其它板块花时间,得到的收获就更大呢?”


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