假定英語課上老四師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（ \ ）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Before visiting a city, I will look for places to visit and then make a choose according to which place I will absolutely see.
Recently, I paid a visit for Leipzig, a beautiful German city. First, I visited Museum of Fine Arts. Sometimes visiting art museums can be a little bit boring and I really enjoyed my visit there. I loved learning about different artists from across the ages.
The followed day I visited St Nicholas Church, that was a church with a very interesting past. I had been heard a lot about the history, so it was amazing to finally visit them in person. Inside, the walls were beautifully decorated with painting.
Before visiting a city, I will look for places to visit and then make a choose（此處為動賓結構，make是動詞後接名詞，而choose是動詞，需要改成名詞choice） according to which place I will absolut see.（absolute是形容詞不能裝飾動詞see，需要將absolute改成副詞absolutely）
Recently, I paid a visit for（pay a visit to 是固定短語意為參觀...因此for要改為to） Leipzig, a beautiful German city. First, I visited Museum of Fine Arts（國外的景點前通常要加定冠詞the）. Sometimes visiting art museums can be a little bit boring and(這裡是表示轉折關係而不是並列，應將and 改成but) I really enjoyed my visit there. I loved learning about different artists from across the ages.
The followed day（固定表達第二天用 the following day） I visited St Nicholas Church, that（此處為非限定性定語從句，不能用that引導，根據先行詞church應改為which） was a church with a very interesting past. I had been heard（根據上下文，此處表達我過去聽說，而不是我過去被聽說，所以been要去掉。） a lot about the history, so it was amazing to finally visit them（這裡這個代詞應是指代前文的church，表單數，church是無生命的事物，them應該為 it） in person. Inside, the walls were beautifully decorated with painting（根據句意，裝飾這些牆的不可能只有一幅畫，所以painting要該為複數paintings）.
