英語科目而言，重大公共衛生事件新冠肺炎疫情極大可能出現在各類大考和高考英語作文中，很多同學也在後臺諮詢相關內容，張老師綜合整理英語作文評分標準和相關範文，供大家參考。

高考英語作文評分細則

高考英語書面表達題（作文題）的考查要點及評分原則：準確運用語法、詞彙、拼寫、標點。使用某些句型、短語、清楚地表達自己的意思，寫出流暢易懂的短文。

1.評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。

2.詞數少於80和多於120的，從總分中減去2分。

3.評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和準確性、上下文的連貫性。

4.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。

5.如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。

新冠疫情考點高頻詞

新型冠狀病毒：novel coronavirus (2019-nCoV) /kə,rəunə'vaiərəs/

肺炎：pneumonia /njuːˈməʊniə/

新型冠狀病毒感染的肺炎：pneumonia caused by the novel coronavirus / novel coronavirus-caused pneumonia

確診病例：confirmed case

疑似病例：suspected case

重症患者：patient in critical condition

病死率：fatality rate

密切接觸者：close contact

接受醫學觀察：be under medical observation

隔離：quarantine /ˈkwɒrəntiːn/

潛伏期：incubation /ˌɪŋkjuˈbeɪʃn/ period

人傳人：human-to-human transmission

飛沫傳播：droplet /ˈdrɒplət/ transmission

發熱、咳嗽、呼吸困難：fever, cough and difficulty in breathing

急性呼吸道感染病狀：acute /əˈkjuːt / respiratory / rəˈspɪrətri / infection symptom

輸入性病例：imported case *輸入性病例：指來自疫情流行區的病例，也稱一代病例

二代病例：secondary infection case * 二代病例：指被一代病例感染的本土病人

隱性感染：asymptomatic /ˌeɪsɪmptəˈmætɪk/ infection *隱性感染：指感染了病毒，但無明顯症狀的病例

疫情防控：epidemic /ˌepɪˈdemɪk/ prevention and control

口罩：

防護服：protective clothing /suits

護目鏡：goggles

一次性手套：disposable gloves

醫療物資：medical supplies

疫苗：vaccine

國際關注的突發公共衛生事件：Public Health Emergency of International Concern (PHEIC)

封城：the lockdown of a city / a city is on lockdown

應急醫院：makeshift hospital

重大突發公共衛生事件一級響應：first-level public health emergency response

國家衛生健康委員會：National Health Commission (NHC)

新冠肺炎疫情英語範文

一、

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Leslie給你發郵件詢問你在新型冠狀病毒肺炎疫情期間是怎麼度過。請你根據下列要點寫一封郵件回覆她。

1. 爆發時間；2. 怎麼度過；3. 你的感受

注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫

參考詞彙：

疫情 epidemic situation

新冠肺炎 novel coronavirus pneumonia

優 秀 範 文

Dear Leslie，

I’m glad to receive your email.You asked me to share with you what I’m doing in the epidemic situation.Here are my experiences.

Since the outbreak of novel coronavirus pneumonia in Wuhan in December,2019,I have been staying at home.On the one hand,I pay close attention to the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news or surfing the Internet;on the other hand I insist on studying.Not only do I read classics, but also I have online courses given by my teachers.Besides,I take exercise every day to keep healthy.Faced with the disaster,many people including doctors,nurses and scientists act bravely and spare no effort to fight against it.They are real heroes.

Thank you for your concern.I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

二、

假定你是李華，你所在的山西國際學校要徵集一封英文感謝信，以致意奮戰在抗擊新型冠狀病毒肺炎第一線的醫護人員，請你根據下列要點寫一封信用於投稿。

1. 表達謝意； 2. 個人感受； 3. 表達信心

注意：1.詞數100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好

參考詞彙：

流行病epidemic

疫情 epidemic situation

新型冠狀病毒 novel corona virus

優 秀 範 文

Dear Medical workers，

I am Li Hua,a high middle school student in Shanxi. I'm writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona Virus.

In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!

I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It's widely believed that our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Good luck and stay well!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

三、

假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Amy來信詢問有關武漢新型冠狀病毒（novel coronavirus）的情況。請你給Amy回信，內容包括：1. 新型冠狀病毒簡況；2. 應對措施；3. 是否有信心戰勝病毒。

注意：詞數100左右；可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優 秀 範 文

Dear Amy,

It is so considerate of you to receive your letter inquiring about novel cononavirus in wuhan. I am writing to tell you about this.

Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in wuhan in December 2019, the Chinese government has decisively closed down the city to prevent the spread of the disease. At the same time, although cases have been found throughout the country, the Chinese people actively face it, together with wuhan to fight the epidemic.

At this particular time, we should go out as little as possible, isolated. If we go out, we must wear protective masks to prevent ourselves from getting infected. In addition, we should keep good healthy habits and keep our body clean.

As many Chinese say, “come on Wuhan".

Yours,

Li Hua

四、

2019年的冬天，一種新型冠狀病毒(the pneumonia epidemic )在武漢華南海鮮市場滋生，悄然從野生動物傳染給人類。

據央視新聞客戶端消息，截至2020年1月29日24時，我國已累計報告新型冠狀病毒感染的肺炎確診病例7711例，死亡170例。

新型冠狀病毒疫情在武漢早期確診的病例，與武漢華南海鮮市場關係很密切。調查顯示，此前在海鮮市場中有非法售賣野生動物現象。人類生存離不開野生動物，但現實生活中野生動物被捕食或作他用比比皆是。

請根據以下表格寫篇Protecting Wild Animals的英語作文。

素材要點：

1.寫作應包括表格及文字等各項內容。

2.為使寫作流暢，在不影響主題表達完整準確的前提下，允許必要的增減與發揮。

3.詞數100左右。

優 秀 範 文

Since the pneumonia epidemic broke out in Wuhan in December, the number of people infected and patients who have died keep climbing. It is reported that the epidemic has something to do with the killing and selling of wild animals at South China Seafood Market. With the decrease of wild animals, many animals are endangered. Worse still,some of them may disappear forever.

There is no doubt that hunting and killing wild animals has a bad influence. For wild animals are killed for their fur, which causes the imbalance of nature. For another, due to the contact between humans and wild animals, epidemics like SARS and pneumonia may infect humans easily.

As far as I am concerned, something must be done to stop this illegal action. First, Nature Reserves are supposed to be built so as to offer more living space to wildlife. Second, be aware that never have wild animals for food, as they are part of environment. Third, it is high timethat we raised people’s awareness to protect wildlife. In this way, we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development.

五、

高考書面表達第一篇常考題材通常考點是有關人物介紹。此題所涉及的人物是大家非常熟悉的鐘南山，同時也是國人追逐的偶像。每個學生都能夠有話可說，大家對其應該比較感興趣，符合新高考英語科目的命題方向。

請你根據下面的提示，用英語對鍾南山作簡單介紹，寫一篇150至200詞的英語作文。

1.鍾南山，1936年10月出生於南京，是21世紀最出名的醫學家之一。

2.1953年，就讀於廣東實驗中學；1960年，畢業於北京醫學院並留校任教。

3.在首屆全國運動會上，鍾南山奪得男子400米欄冠軍，創造了當時的全國紀錄。

4.2003年春，SARS在中國和世界爆發，以鍾南山為代表的醫護工作者經長期努力,抗擊了非典；2004年，鍾南山被評為“感動中國2003年度”十大人物之一。

5.他在醫學領域工作60多年，是一位受國人尊敬的好醫生。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優 秀 範 文

（該範文來自廣東省梅州市葉塘中學 劉懷中原創）

Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province. He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century. He studied at Guangdong experimental high school in 1953 and graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. In the first Chinese National Games, Zhong Nanshan got the championship of the men's 400m Hurdles and set up a National record at that time.

In the spring of 2003，the SARS epidemic broke out in China and across the globe. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against SARS. At that time no one really knew much about SARS and most people had no natural defenses against the disease.Dangerous as it was,Zhong Nanshan worked hard day and night treating the patients.Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result. Soon the SARS epidemic was stopped in its track.

Zhong Nanshan was awarded one of the top ten people moving China in 2004. He has been working in the medical field for over 60 years. He is a good doctor in the countrymen' eyes and respected by all the people in China.

六、

假如你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom寫信詢問有關武漢傳染性肺炎的事情。請你給Tom寫一封回信。

要點：1.肺炎情況；2.應對措施；3.有信心戰勝病情。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

範文一

作者：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高三年級 鄭佩欣

指導老師：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高中部 許老師

範文二

作者：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高三年級 洪婉儀

指導老師：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高中部 許老師

範文三

作者：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高三年級 蔡榕欣

指導老師：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高中部 許老師

範文四

作者：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高三年級 黃瀧怡

指導老師：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高中部 許老師

範文五

作者：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高三年級 鄭昕

指導老師：汕頭市潮陽實驗學校 高中部 許老師

七、

假定你是高三學生李華，你的同學王平春節去武漢探親因新冠狀病毒肺炎疫情迅速擴散，他有發熱症狀而暫時滯留武漢，請你代表全班同學給此時處於焦慮和鬱悶中的他寫一封英文慰問信。

要點如下：1. 對其表示關心和同情。2. 對其表示安慰並提供幫助。3. 表達願望和祝福。

注意：1. 詞數150左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優 秀 範 文

【 possible version】

　　Dear Wang Pin,Knowing that you are delayed in Wuhan, I am really getting upset about it. So are our classmates. I'm writing to convey our concern to you on behalf of the class.Words came that Wuhan was in bad condition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus. However, dear friend, there's no sense worrying about it too much. You are supposed to stay optimistic. After all, you merely have a bit of fever. College Entrance Examination is around the corner, you know. So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. As scheduled, our online class will be held on Feb. 8. All of the classmates have access to the Internet courses wherever you are. It is convenient for us to study, isn't it?Is there anything I can do for you? Feel free to contact me. I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

八、

假定你是學生會主席李華，當前新冠狀病毒肆虐，請你圍繞 “從小事做起共戰疫情” 這一主題，給全校學生寫一封英文倡議書。

要點如下：1. 倡議的原因和目的；2. 倡議的具體內容；3. 發出倡議

注意：1. 詞數150左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫

優 秀 範 文

　　Proposal

　　Dear schoolmates,

　　Over the past fifteen days, the novel virus has made its way around China. It has a strong impact on our life and study. Faced with the crisis, we students should respond actively to the appeal from authority and experts. In order to ease the serious condition, all of students had better do as follows.

　　First of all, stay at home and don't go out if not necessary. Be responsible for yourself and others. In addition, do wear masks while you are in the open air. As we all know, it can reduce the risk of contracting the virus. Washing hands as often as possible is needed, too. Most importantly, everyone ought to have a positive attitude to the campaign with the disease. Attitude is everything.

　　My dear friends, there may be a long way to go for us. Let's work hand in hand to overcome anxiety and do some bits. We have faith in the fact that tomorrow is another day.

　　The Students' Union

Feb. 14th, 2020

九、

看圖寫一篇週記，供考生學習參考。

優 秀 範 文

Last week,in support of the battle against the novel coronavirus in Wuhan,my classmates and I initiated a campaign with the name “Lucky Money Plan”,which turned out to be worthwhile and beneficial. Learning from TV that the epidemic situation in Wuhan went bad to worse and that the protective facilities were badly needed, I really felt uneasy and depressed, determining to do my bit to cope with this worrying situation. After careful consideration,a good idea hit me that I could raise some money to purchase medical supplies for Wuhan.

Without delay,I posted my advocation letter named Lucky Money Plan on the school website,stressing the significance of the activity and calling on all my fellows to take an active part in it.Much to my amazement,all of them showed great interest and enthusiasm and donated all their lucky money,fully expressing their affection and their heart of love,which also explains the true meaning of the old saying “One in trouble,assistance comes from all directions”.Money having been collected,I ordered a wide range of medical necessities on the Internet,including protective clothing,masks,goggles and so forth.Through express,these items were directly sent to a hospital in Wuhan.

A few days later,I unexpectedly received a telephone call from the hospital.The doctor spoke highly of what we had done for them and for the people in Wuhan,saying our kindness and our support strengthened their determination to wipe out the virus and made them know they were not alone in this battle.Hearing these words,I felt extremely excited as well as proud.I was convinced that we Chinese people,with the whole nation’s joint efforts,were sure to win this battle.

十、

假定你是武漢某高中學生李華，你在2019武漢秋令營結識的朋友Tom瞭解到武漢爆發的新冠狀病毒肺炎疫情，組織了德國伯樂中學中文合唱團傾情演唱中文歌《讓世界充滿愛》，為武漢加油。你看了這個小視頻非常感動，請給他寫一封英文感謝信。

要點如下：1. 表達感動和感謝。2. 告訴他你的現狀。3. 表達信心和願望。

注意：1. 詞數150左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優 秀 範 文

Dear Tom,

　　Words failed me when I watched the video from your school chorus. Especially when I heard "Come on, Wuhan!" , I was so deeply moved that I couldn't help replaying it again and again. I truly appreciate your love and support.Those days at the Autumn Camp are unforgettable. I often enjoy the pictures taken at the camp. Currently, I hardly go out due to the outbreak of novel Coronavirus. Instead, I spend time taking online courses, watching American plays or listening to English songs. And it takes me a little time to read books that I am keen on. Can you inform me of your recent life in the next e-mail?People across the country support Wuhan to the best of their ability. I'm definitely convinced that we can get through the hard times. Looking forward to your next visit to China! May our friendship last forever!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

十一、

假定你是李華，在新冠狀病毒肺炎疫情如此嚴峻的時刻，有少數不良商家以原價數倍的價格銷售口罩。針對這一現象，老師讓你們用英語給消費者協會寫一封投訴信，作為今天的作業發到班級微信群裡。

要點如下：1. 介紹自己，寫信目的。2. 說明情況，表示氣憤。3. 希望重視，儘快解決。

注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞彙：

傳染病，氾濫 epidemic

新冠狀病毒 novel coronavirus

消費者協會 Consumers' Association

優 秀 範 文

To whom it may concern,

I am Li Hua, a senior school student. I am extremely sorry to disturb you, but I have to write a letter to convey my complaint and dissatisfaction.The novel coronavirus epidemic is still tough and annoying. However, you can't imagine that a small number of businesses are so mean as to sell the face masks at an unreasonable price. It is said that it can be five times as high as the normal price. My classmates and I are burning with anger.I hope Consumers' Association can give much attention to this. I'd appreciate it if you can cope with it as early as you can.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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