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FCE 作文的句型句式（讓你再提高几分）
（第一頁是冗長的肺腑之言，您需要認真查閱哦）
備考 FCE 考試孩子們，以下給出的是大學英語六級真題作文的寫作範文，FCE 作文也是這麼難，
無需爭論，對孩子目前水平極其不合適或是對這個語言考試不感冒則直接忽略這些即可。
大學六級作文要求的詞數是至少 150 詞，可參考裡面的句式和詞彙運用，切記我們廣州考的不是
青少版 FCE，是成人版的，所以思維需要突破自己的侷限，不要例子都是 my classmates 或是 school
homework，多結合平時自己看到的書籍和其他內容，探索更深層的觀點。另外 FCE 作文要求 140-190
詞，寫到 180 詞是最佳的，切忌寫到 200 多個詞，超詞的部分改卷老師不看。
學習參考範文時，需注意以下幾點：1、審題時需審清作文題每段要求寫作的內容，不要跑題, FCE
考試中也是，看清楚每個問題，切忌遺忘了某個需要涉及的問題，最好每個問題都是一個段落，這樣
改卷老師可以很快找到你的觀點，判斷有沒有按要求回答完所有問題；2、學習參考範文時，需看清楚
每段中作者的觀點是什麼（即論點），然後看這個觀點是用幾個證據支持的（即論據）；3、理解性的記
憶參考範文中的句型，尤其是語法、關聯詞、詞組都很好的句型；4、朗讀記憶整篇文章，積累文章寫
作的語感。
FCE 作文中首先就是需要回答完所有題目中的問題，所以務必審題，磨刀不誤砍柴工，沒有想好
就寫一通最後自己發現寫得走題還得擦掉重寫。其次需要注意觀點的表達，多用連接詞，務必要分段，
如果你的文章只有一兩段則非常危險；對於內容的拓展不要舉太長的例子，舉例子時所用的語言需要
簡單明瞭。然後需要注意句式和詞彙的變化，切忌文章裡面出現多個一樣的形容詞連接詞或副詞（改
卷老師忽覺得你很詞窮），另外不要寫太多簡單句，如果你的一個句子裡面只有五六個單詞，那說明你
的英語能力很低（那如果你試圖全篇都用逗號，最後再加句號，那說明你還不理解語法結構哦）。最後
有一些固定的句式（尤其是議論文），孩子們可以套用一下哈，另外用插入語，分詞作狀語以及多個從
句幵行都是高端句型的表現哈。
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第 1 篇 2011 年 6 月 Certificate Craze (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、 現在許多人熱衷於各類證書考試 2、其目的各不相同 3、在我看來
In recent years, to get more certificates has become a new craze among people. If you ask a
person what he or she is busy doing, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a
certificate of some kind.
People prepare for various kinds of certificates for different purposes. Firstly, the employment
pressure forces people to get various certificates in order to get ideal jobs or be more competitive in
the job markets. Secondly, some people want to learn more knowledge and improve abilities in more
fields so that they are eager to prepare for various certificates such as certificates in English,
computer, customs declaration or even engineering, etc.
Form my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. Getting
certificates indeed proves that one has gained the related knowledge in a field while, to do a good job
,one needs to obtain more practical experiences in real work.
To conclude, don't get certificates blindly, but try to practice yourself in real work. (172 words)
第 2 篇 2010 年 12 月 On University Ranking (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、 當今社會，高校排名很流行 2、 個人看法不同 3、 我自己的觀點
In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational we
bsitesor newspapers. University and college ranking has become increasingly popular throughout
the nation. Although the ranking standards vary, these lists have great influence on students and they
are even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities.
As to this issue, opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold that university ranki
ng dramatically promotes the development of university in various fields. Such growth as the grand
libraries, splendid stadiums and fruitful academic achievements, has caught the attention of the
world. However, others maintain that university ranking also leads to some undesirable
consequences. For example, academic fraud will be encouraged in order to achieve a higher ranking
among universities. Besides, university rankings will affect the number of students who enroll the
universities, and universities with higher ranking will attract more and better students while one with
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lower ranking will lose excellent students, further leading to the inequality of universities（分詞作狀語）.
As I see it, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, University ranking does
encourage the development and growth of colleges, ranging from enhancing the teaching and researc
h levels to investing in more facilities and equipment. On the other hand, universities‟ ranking
will divide different universities more dramatically, resulting in the bigger gap amonguniversities,
which can not be a good future. (232 words)
第 3 篇 2010 年 6 月 Due Attitude Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese
1、 近年來在學生中出現了忽視中文的現象 2、 出現這種現象的原因和後果 3、 為了改變這種
狀況，我認為…… (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay，但這篇太長了，學習句式就好了)
Do you remember these famous names in Chinese literature: Lu xun, Zhu zi qing, Lao she or Bin
g xin? How familiar these names are! Unfortunately, countless students pay no attention to the study
of Chinese nowadays and for the majority of students, the study of Chinese has become a remote
memory.
Several reasons can account for this phenomenon. Firstly, the globalization stimulated the
spread of foreign cultures, and many Chinese students tend to learn foreign languages, leading to the
ignorance of their study of Chinese. Secondly, college students are, to some extent, forced to study
foreign languages to pass exams or find good jobs so that they couldn't spare any time to study
Chinese.
There have been serious consequences owing to the ignorance of the study of Chinese. For
example, more and more students have difficulties in writing and reading Chinese articles. Many
students can speak foreign languages fluently but are reluctant to express themselves in Chinese. In
the long run, Chinese cultures will necessarily be neglected.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things
get worse. Chinese government should emphasize the development of Chinese culture and Chinese
language. In addition, colleges and universities should change teaching approaches to attract the
interest of more students in studying Chinese. Finally, students should enhance their awareness of
mastering their mother tongue. Through these efforts, I think, the study of Chinese can be promoted.
(241 words)
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第 4 篇 2009 年 12 月 Should parents send their kids to art classes? (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、現在有不少家長送孩子參加各種藝術班 2、對這種做法有人表示支持，有人幵不贊成 3、
我認為
There is a growing tendency nowadays for parents to send their children to register and attend
a great variety of arts courses, such as dancing, calligraphy and musical instruments training, etc.
However, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon.
Some people maintain that these art classes are of great necessity and benefits to students.
According to a recent survey on pre-school intelligence level, the respondents who take part in art
classes tend to perform better than those who haven't because their minds can be broadened through
some art training. Moreover, the former can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge
and skills which are not taught in their schools. By contrast, others argue that art classes
would bring about heavy burdens to students and students might not have adequate time to take rest
and reflect on what they have learned in schools.
As a university student, I have ever participated in some arts courses, such as singing and
painting classes and they proved to be helpful for my hobby development. Therefore, I believe that
taking some art courses properly is meaningful to students' development in the
long-term. (190 words)
第 5 篇 2009 年 6 月 On the Importance of a Name. (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、有人說名字或名稱很重要 2、也有人覺得名字或名稱無關緊要 3、我認為
A name is the representation of a person or a product. However, people have diverse opinions
on the importance of a name.
Some people say that name is important because it is the symbol that distinguishes one thing or
person from the others. Besides, a good name will bring people some nice association. A good name,
whether it belongs to a person or a product, may be easily accepted by others and leave the deep
impression on people.
By contrast, some people think that the name is unimportant. They say whether a person is good
or bad cannot be determined by his or her name, and so is a product. The name is only a symbol, and
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a person will be recognized only with good behavior and performance even if he or she has not a
good name. So will a product.
In my opinion, the name is important but the nature behind the name is more important. A child
will be given a good name with the expectation of the future wealth, health and achievements but in
order to achieve these, hard work is necessary. Similarly, a product with a good name will be widely
accepted only if it has good quality and performance. (207 words)
第 6 篇 2008 年 12 月 How to improve student's mental health (類似 FCE 作文中的 Article)
1、大學生的心理健康十分重要 2、因此，學校可以...... 3、我們自己應當......
In recent years, there have been many reports at the colleges that misbehaved students resort to
violence. Such behavior has exerted negative impacts towards other students, families and the
society in a whole. Therefore how to improve students' mental health has become a priority of
colleges and the society. After all, the quality-oriented education is to develop students in an
all-round way.
Colleges play an important role in improving the mental health of students. Firstly, some
teachers should be specially arranged to supervise and communicate with students and they can
guide students in overcoming the difficulties of life, thus preventing the mental illness of students.
Secondly, professional consulting services should be provided for students to solve their mental or
psychological problems in order to avoid the bigger risks. Besides, college students should learn to
communicate with each other to avoid the misunderstanding and prevent the misbehavior. Teamwork
is also important in preventing mental illness of college students because everyone will participate in
the teamwork and they have to express themselves and understand others effectively in order to
achieve a common goal. (181 words)
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第 7 篇 2008 年 6 月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、隨著信息技術的發展，電子圖書越來越多 2、有人認為電子圖書會取代傳統圖書，理由
是……3、我的看法
Recent decades have seen the rapid development of information technology, and thereby
E-books have wound their way into our daily life. More and more people like to read books online,
especially the young. They can read classics online for knowledge, read magazines or novels online
for leisure, and even read professional articles online for research.
Many people hold the idea that it will not take long for E-books to replace traditional books
because E-books have quite a few advantages over traditional ones. First, E-books are more
accessible to readers, and the readers just need to log onto the internet and read online.
Second,thanks to the advanced technology, E-books is much cheaper than printed ones and it takes
readers less money to buy E-books online, and sometimes, e-books are free.
From my point of view, it is not likely for E-books to replace traditional books for lots of
reasons. For example, reading E-books for a long time will do harm to our eyes, so many people
prefer to reading printed books. Besides, computers and the internet haven't yet been popularized to
every corner of our life, so readers will find themselves more accessible to printed materials.
(196 words)
第 8 篇 2007 年 12 月 The Digital Age (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、如今數字化產品得到越來越廣泛的使用，例如… 2、數字化產品的使用對人們工作、學習
和生活產生的影響
Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced digital technology, more and more
digital products are commonly and widely used in everyday life, ranging from computers and MP4s
to mobile phones and digital cameras. We are indeed coming into the digital age.
The popularity of digital products will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life.
On the one hand, the digital products really facilitate our life. With the help of computers, we may
even deal with our work at home, enjoying music at the same time. With digital cameras, we may
take clearer photos and keep them more easily and permanently. With digital TV programs, it is
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convenient for us to watch whatever programs we like at any time.
However, on the other hand, some people are becoming too dependent on digital products and
almost becoming slaves of advanced technology. Nowadays some students even can't calm down to
study without wearing their MP4s and mobile phones at hand. What a terrible scene!
To conclude, with digital products we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and
enjoy a better-off life, but we must take sensible use of them, always being the master of them.
(198words)
第 9 篇 2007 年 6 月 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?
(類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
1、有人做好亊期望得到回報；2、有人認為應該像雷鋒那樣做好亊不圖回報；3、我的觀點。
When asked about whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed, different
people hold different views.
Some argue that there should be a reward for a good deed. Firstly, it will encourage the people
who did good deeds, giving them praises from the spirit and material. Secondly, it will set an
inspiring example to the public, encouraging more people to do more good deeds.
By contrast, many people assume that good deeds should be performed without expectations
of any rewards. They think that doing good deeds and helping others is one of the indispensable
virtues of Chinese people. No matter whether one can get rewards or not, he or she should help
others in need or in trouble. Little by little, more and more people will help others without expecting
rewards.
In my opinion, there is some truth in both arguments. On the one hand, people should not
expect a reward when doing a good deed. After all, helping people in trouble is an enjoyment.
However, on the other hand, people who are helped should learn to reward---reward people who
help you, people in need, and all the people in the society. Only by this, a harmonious society can be
formed. (206 words)
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第 10 篇 2006 年 12 月新六級 The Importance of Reading Classics
(更類似 FCE 作文中的 Article)
1、 閱讀經典書籍對人的成長至關重要 2、現在願意閱讀經典的人卻越來越少，原因
是…… 3、 我們大學生應該怎麼做
Reading classics plays a vital role in a person's growth. By reading classic works, either Chinese
or foreign, one can learn a great deal about history, geography, politics, cultures and customs.
Besides, as these classics are the outstanding representatives of human language, reading them can
enormously improve our ability of reading and writing and help to inherit cultural traditions.
However, a diminishing number of people would like to read classics now. A variety of
factors may have contributed to this phenomenon, but the following are the critical ones. In the
first place, as the pace of life and work quickens, people can find little time to indulge themselves
in thick and serious works. They would rather read light and easy magazines or surf the Internet and
do online reading. In the second place, most classics depict things far away from our real life, which
makes reading them seem irrelevant.
As college students, inheriting and developing cultural heritage is our responsibility. Therefore,
it is essential that we should make plans to read classics regularly. Besides, we should try to influenc
e people around us into reading them. (185 words)
第 11 篇 2006 年 12 月老六級 The Celebration of Western Festivals
1、 現在國內有不少人喜歡過西方的某些節日 2、 產生這種現象的原因
3、 這種現象可能帶來的影響 (類似 FCE 作文中的 Essay)
Nowadays, an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals. For
instance, on Valentine's Day, many people give flowers or chocolate to the one they love. Another
case in point is Christmas. It seems that people around the country now love to celebrate the festival.
A number of factors account for the phenomenon mentioned above. In the first place, due
to the policy of reform and opening-up, Chinese people tend to know and learn more about Western
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culture and more and more people begin to celebrate Western festivals. Secondly, some businessmen
wish to make money by encouraging people to celebrate those Western festivals. Last but not least,
traditional Chinese festivals lose their attraction, so many people tend to find joy in Western
festivals.
As more people celebrate the Western festivals, many Chinese festivals tend to be ignored.
For example, Chinese Valentine‟s Day, on the Seventh day of July in the Lunar Calendar, is seldom
celebrated and is nearly forgotten. Little by little, traditional Chinese cultures will be neglected and
lost. When the cultural root of a nation is pulled up, will the nation live for a long time? Therefore,
western festivals can be celebrated but more Chinese festivals and cultures need to be valued.
(208 words)
第 12 篇 2006 年 6 月 Traveling Abroad
Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005
1、 近十年來 X 市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅遊 2、出現這一現象的原因 3、這種現象可能產
生的影響 。（六級還有個圖表題，分析圖表然後分析，大家看看觀點就好了）
It can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of people
traveling abroad in City X in the past decade. As the chart shows, the year 1995 witnessed only
about 10,000 people from this city touring abroad. In 2000, the number soared to nearly 40,000. Last
year, more than 120,000 people in the city chose to spend their vacations outside China.
A number of factors account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical
ones. First, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, people have become wealthier than
before and they have more money for traveling abroad. Secondly, some state policies and the boom
of touring industry provide citizens with more opportunities to go out and see the world. Last but no
t the least, people have attached greater importance to the quality of life, thus they spend more
money and time traveling and sight-seeing abroad.
In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of China‟s fast expanding economy and people‟s risin
g standard of life. The trend of traveling abroad will further stimulate the development of our econo
my and broaden people‟s horizons. Meanwhile, more and more foreign touring markets are willing t
o be open to the Chinese, promoting the communication between each other. (216 words)
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第 13 篇 2005 年 12 月 A Letter Declining a Job Offer (類似 FCE 作文中的 letter)
1、 對公司提供職位表示感謝 2、解釋為何不能接受所提供的職位 3、 希望予以諒解，幵表
示對公司的良好祝願 December 24, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam:
In response to your letter on December 20, 2005, I was informed that I would be offered the
position as an interpreter in your company. I cordially appreciate your trust and I am much obliged to
you for providing me with such a valuable opportunity.
However, I have to tell you that I can not accept it. The major reason is that I don't think I am
the most appropriate candidate for this post. As a non-English major, though my written and spoken
English are more outstanding than most of my peers, I am not well trained in translation, not to menti
on interpretation, which, I believe is highly demanding. Maybe my performance in the oral
examination has misled you. Actually, I am more interested and more competent in my own major,
i.e. program designing, and I happened to have been offered such a position with another company.
Nonetheless, I, again, want to express my sincere gratefulness for your generous offer and I earnestly
apologize for any inconvenience caused to you. Finally, I hope you can find the ideal candidate as so
on as possible. (正文 183 words)
Best regards.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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第 14 篇 2005 年 6 月 Say No to Pirated Products. (類似 FCE 作文中的 Article)
1、 目前盜版的現象比較嚴重 2、 造成這種現象的原因及危害 3、我們應該怎麼做?
盜版 piracy (n.) 盜版產品 pirated products 知識產權 intellectual property rights
侵犯版權 infringe somebody's copyright; copyright infringement
Piracy is a serious problem with which this country is confronted. In many places we see people
sell pirated books or disks. Actually, piracy has become so widespread that it has severely hindered
the development of the nation's economy.
A number of factors account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones.
First, pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones, so they are very attractive to people,
especially youngsters, who are not financially well-off. Secondly, with highly developed technology
, it is not difficult to manufacture pirated products. With one authorized copy, the illegal producers
can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost, thus making huge profits.
As a result, intellectual property rights are severely infringed upon and honest producers lose
the motivation to develop new products. Meanwhile, pirated products are often of low quality, thus
damaging the interest of buyers.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be
formulated and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of pirated products. Besides, people
should be educated not to buy pirated products. With these measures taken, we have reasons to
believe that the problem can be solved in the near future. (204 words)
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第 15 篇 2004 年 12 月 (類似 FCE 作文中的 letter)
Write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is
seriously ill.
1、 對病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況 2、目前的困難：無法繼續承擔醫療費用，
需要護理 3、希望捐助，聯繫方式
Dear friends,
I am writing to you, on behalf of the Student Union, to ask for your help for Li Ming, a schoolmate
of ours from the Department of Computer Science. He is seriously ill now and has to have a heart tra
nsplant at once. To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country and his family is quite
poor.
In fact, his parents have already been deep in debt in order to send him to university, so now they
can't afford the big expenses for the heart operation. In addition, he needs someone to take care of hi
m day and night. Only with intense care can our friend recover from his disease. But as you know,
his family is far away and can not come here very soon.
On no account can we see our friend suffer or die. He is in desperate need of your help, especially fi
nancial donations to help him pay for the medical expenses. Let's all give him our hands. Anyone
who wants to offer help can contact us at 88588858 or you can email us by [email protected]. Please
act without delay. (正文 188words)
Yours sincerely,
The Student Union
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第 16 篇 2004 年 6 月 (類似 FCE 作文中的 letter or email)
Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore.
設想你買了一本英文字典，發現有這樣那樣的質量問題，書店的服務態度又不好，因此給報社
編輯寫信。信中必須包含以下內容：1、亊情的起因 2、與書店交涉的經過 3、呼籲服務行業
必須提高服務質量
June 20th, 2004
Dear Mr. / Miss Editor,
I am a student from Tsinghua University and I am writing to you about my experience of buying a
dictionary and my complaint about the service of a bookstore.
A month ago, I went to a bookstore nearby the university to buy an English dictionary. It was only
after I paid for the dictionary and returned to school that I found some pages were missing.But when
I went back to the bookstore to tell them about the matter, they said that I should have checked the
dictionary before I left the store. According to them, it was my fault and they hold no responsibility
for the whole matter.
What I want to say is that sincerity and enthusiasm are vital to the survival of service industries in
such a market economy featured by fierce competition. It was quite easy for them to change the
dictionary for me but they refused to do so. They will lose all customers if they persist in doing so. I
hope that this letter can draw the attention of the whole society and that the problem can be solved as
soon as possible. (正文 189 words)
Best regards.
Yours sincerely Li Ming
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