雅思寫作:城鄉差異帶來的問題和解決方式

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雅思寫作:城鄉差異帶來的問題和解決方式

2017年12月9日 雅思大作文題目

“ A rise in the standard of living in a country often seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?”

本週雅思作文是關於生活水準的提高帶來的城鄉差異等問題,以及其解決方式。本題是2013年10月26日的真題重現。

城鄉差距會帶來哪些問題呢?比如說資源的分配問題,城市會分配到越來越多的資源,越來越先進,而農村則會相對越來越落後。隨之帶來的影響包括勞動力人口向城市湧入,造成城市資源短缺,就業市場競爭激烈;而農村則會出現教育水平低下,基礎設施落後等一系列問題。對於城鄉差異,我們應當加大對農村地區的基礎設施和教育投入,讓城鄉和諧發展。

雅思老師筆記

01

Cities have benefited more from the rise of living standard than the rural areas so that the gap between the urban and rural areas has been widened. Consequently, a series of problems related to the urban-rural gap arise.

生活水平的提高,城市獲益比鄉村地區更多,這樣,城市與鄉村地區的差距就增大了。由此,一系列與城鄉差距相關的問題就出現了。

解析

(1)本段為引入段,直接進入話題,但對題目表達方式進行了簡單改寫。

(2) consequently 結果

(3) arise (問題/情況)出現

02

As more budgets are invested in the infrastructure in the urban rather than the rural areas, urban population enjoy better educational and medical resources as well as more convenient transportation. To struggle for a better life, labors from rural areas rush into the cities, making the already limited city space more and more crowded and resulting in the prohibitively high cost of living. For those who migrate from rural areas to cities, they may have a hard time adjusting themselves to the lifestyle in cities since it is so very different from their previous country life. As a result, they will face a job market so competitive that it will be extremely difficult for them to find a satisfactory job. Then, with the ever increasing number of jobless young people come more serious social problems like stealing, robbing and other crimes.

隨著更多的預算投入城市基礎設施,而不是農村地區,城市人口享有更好的教育和醫療資源,以及更便利的交通。為了爭取更好的生活,農村勞動力湧入城市,使原本有限的城市空間越來越擁擠,導致生活費用過高。對那些從農村遷移到城市的人來說,他們可能很難適應城市的生活方式,因為城市的生活方式和他們以前的鄉村生活有很大的不同。因此,他們將面臨一個競爭十分激烈的就業市場,很難找到一份滿意的工作。這樣,失業青年越來越多,隨之而來的就是更嚴重的社會問題,比如偷竊、搶劫等犯罪。

解析

(1)本段論述城鄉差異帶來的壞處:空間擁擠,工作壓力,社會問題。

(2)infrastructure 基礎設施

(3)result in 導致(=lead to; cause)

(4)prohibitively 極端地,令人望而生畏地

(5)adjust oneself to... 調整自己以適應......

(6)competitive 競爭很大的;有競爭力的

雅思寫作:城鄉差異帶來的問題和解決方式

03

Another concern is that it is not always possible for children from rural areas to get access to proper schooling in cities. Hence, these children have to be left behind in the countryside, separated from their parents, and eventually find themselves unable to compete with those who grow up in cities. Very unfortunately, as the educational resources keep pouring into the cities, the rural children will remain unable to use them, which means the educational gap between the urban and rural children may exist for quite a long time.

另一個問題是,來自農村地區的孩子往往不能在城市得到恰當的教育,因此,這些孩子必須留在農村,與父母分開,最終發現自己無法與那些在城市長大的孩子競爭。不幸的是,隨著教育資源源源不斷地湧入城市,農村兒童將繼續無法使用這些資源,這意味著城鄉兒童之間的教育差距可能會存在很長一段時間。

解析

(1)本段論證城鄉差異帶來的另一個問題:兒童教育的差異。

(2)get access to 獲得;進入

(3)leave behind 留在身後

(4)eventually 最終

04

To break the vicious cycle that will lead to a wider urban-rural gap, the government is obliged to balance the development of cities and rural areas by investing more money in the public services such as schools and hospitals and providing more job opportunities in rural areas. Besides, agricultural tourism can be developed to bring income for the rural population. For those eager to move to cities, the government should offer them more training opportunities to ensure they can find their position in cities.

為了打破導致城鄉差距擴大的惡性循環,政府必須通過向公共服務領域(比如學校和醫院)投入更多資金來平衡城市和農村的發展,同時在農村地區提供更多的就業機會。此外,還可以發展農業旅遊,為農村人口帶來收入。對於那些急於搬到城市的人,政府應該為他們提供更多的培訓機會,以確保他們能夠在城市中找到自己的位置。

解析

(1)本段為結論段,提出解決辦法。

(2)vicious cycle 惡性循環

(3)be obliged to do... 必須做......

(4)ensure 確保

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