由於國內英文考試題型極少涉及到數據圖表的描述,所以雅思小作文讓很多“烤鴨”不知如何下筆。雖然範文看了不少,看懂範文也很容易,但是提筆完成一篇看似簡簡單單的150字要求的小作文卻不是一件容易的事情。
下面天津環球教育蘇蓮鳳老師會帶領大家如何在半個小時內構建好小作文的寫作流程。
同學們只需要遵循如下三個步驟即可:首先,同學們要先搭建好寫作框架,其次,對框架進行內容填充,最後,注意語言質量,包括詞彙和語法準確性和多樣性。
第一步:寫作框架的搭建
小作文常規上是寫4-5段,段落結構搭建如下
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第二步:框架內容填充
以劍9 Test 2 的小作文為範例
The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995-2002.
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開頭段:對上述方框中的內容進行逐一同義詞替換,即改為:
The bar chart compares the changes in how much time the UK residents spent on three types of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002.
概述段:歸納描述對象的趨勢變化
Overall, the use of local-fixed lines remained constant across the years ,while national and international fixed lines as well as mobiles all gained popularity.
主體段:數據細節描述
1.全文都是文字性描述,沒有數據支撐是不完整的小作文;
2.全文大篇幅進行大量數據堆積,而沒有按照一定的邏輯性呈現數據,也不是一篇好的小作文;
3.主體段落寫作注意時態;
4.注意描述對象是否寫正確;
主體段範例:
Local-fixed line was the most widely used in 1995, with around 70 billion minutes spent on it, which was nearly twice the figure for national and international fixed-line and 23 times the figure for mobile.
The following four years witnessed steady increments in the use of all three types of telephone calls. While local-fixed line reached the peak at 90 billion minutes in 1999, national and international fixed-line was still half the prevalence of local-fixed line and the use of mobile remained fairly low,at only 15 billion minutes.
However, the gap between the types narrowed significantly over the subsequent 4-year period, with the popularity of local-fixed line dropping dramatically to 70 billion in 2000 and the use of mobile tripling to 45 billion. Similarly, there was a gradual rise in the use of national and international fixed line, ending at roughly 58 billion.
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