Go to the beach
We go to the beach for our holiday.It's cloudy,I'm wearing a red dress and a pink hat. Mom said,'Don't forget your umbrella.' Then we go out.
Soon after,it's rainy I put on my raincoat and use my mbrella.
Later,it's sunny. I take off my raincoat and the red dress,and I put on my bathingsuit .Then we go swimming in the sea.
It's a nice day!
這是秒秒8歲的第一篇英語習作,據老師評價想象力豐富,場景變化和服裝的切換非常合理,是一篇符合孩子樂趣的習作。摒除單詞拼寫和時態語法的瑕疵,這篇文章邏輯合理,結構明晰,作為第一篇作文實在是佳作。特此記錄第一篇作為,鼓勵秒秒在英語探索更多收穫,謝謝老師的鼓勵。
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