如何读懂(半)开放作文的提示,抓住关键词句,写出好的作文


解题指导

写(半)开放性作文,考生首先要读懂所给的提示,弄清情况和要求,然后抓住关键词句,进行记叙、解释、说明、议论,再根据要求加以合理想象,并用通顺的语言表达出来。要具体做到:

1.认真审题,把握要求,找准关键句,提炼主题。

2.依据主线,草拟提纲,梳理文章脉络。

3.定位人称,确立时态,遣词造句组篇章。(半)开放作文人称的使用较为灵活,考生应根据文章提示准确定位人称,然后将重点放在文章的遣词造句上,尽可能运用自己熟悉的表达形式来灵活表达。

实战演练

(2017·甘肃天水甘谷二中模拟)

假设你的笔友Tom因上次高三期末数学考试未及格而备受打击,情绪低落。请你(王华)给他写一封信,鼓励他重拾自信,实现梦想。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

构思要点 请写出要点提纲


范文赏析 欣赏并背诵满分作文

Dear Tom,

I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam,but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.

As Senior Three students,we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success.There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure,which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes.Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study.As for your anxiety,I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that you can go on with your study energetically and efficiently.

I hope all above can help you a lot.Let's work hard together and turn our dreams into reality.

Yours,

Wang Hua

作文升级 依据括号内提示改写满分作文

Dear Tom,

I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam,but ①it worries me most that you are in low spirits when facing failure(当你面临失败时的低落情绪是最让我担心的;it作形式主语).

As Senior Three students,we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success.There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.②In order to escape repeating the similar mistakes,we should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure (为了避免犯同样的错误,我们应该不遗余力地分析失败的原因).③Finding out the cause of our failure,we can make progress in our study (找到了失败的原因,我们就能在学习中取得进步).As for your anxiety,I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that you can go on with your study energetically and efficiently.

I hope all above can help you a lot.Let's work hard together and turn our dreams into reality.

Yours,

Wang Hua

对点训练

(一)

(2017·河北石家庄二模)

假如你是高三学生李华。你从新华网上得知21st Century就"我们如何支配压岁钱"这一主题向大家征稿。请用英文向报社投稿,介绍你的预算。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I've learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.


Yours sincerely,

Li Hua


参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I've learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.

In China,it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Festival.So it is important for us to put the money to good use.How I budget my gift money is as follows.

First of all,I want to buy some books to enrich myself.In addition,I will join in a summer camp,which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork.Besides,I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help.

Anyway,we should spend our gift money doing something useful and meaningful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

(二)

(2017·河北石家庄二模)

假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Gary Lee即将来华。他想有一个中文名字,向你求助。请回复邮件,介绍中文姓名的特点,帮他取一个中文名字,并简要说明理由。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.名字可用中文表示;

3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Gary,


Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文

Dear Gary,

I'm very glad to know that you are coming to China.Of course,a Chinese name will help you fit in with the new culture better.

The biggest difference between Chinese names and English names is that we put the family name first.A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters,which often carry some special significance or expectations.As you are an energetic and warm-hearted boy,I recommend you the name 李阳,Li Yang.The family name,which is shared by billions of Chinese,has the same pronunciation as yours.The given name means the sun in Chinese.

I hope you like your new name and have a really good time in China.

Yours,

Li Hu a